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第八講巧奪天工的連篇技巧,,有效地使用語句間的連接成分巧妙地銜接過渡，利用好“開篇、承接、轉(zhuǎn)折、總結(jié)”四個(gè)方法使文章流暢自然，是考生在書面表達(dá)題目上爭創(chuàng)高分的非常重要的條件。一、開篇——?jiǎng)?chuàng)造良好開端1.常用表達(dá)“開篇”的過渡詞語(常用在段落或文章的開頭),first，firstofall，atfirst，inthefirstplace，firstly，tostartwith，recently，now，atpresent，inrecentyears，ingeneral，generallyspeaking，atpresent，lately，currently等。,2.常用表達(dá)“開篇”的句型,(1)Itisoftensaidthat...(2)Astheproverbsays...(3)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...(4)Itisclear/obviousthat...(5)Manypeopleoftenask...FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.(陜西卷)It’softensaidthatallworkwithoutplaymakesJackadullboy.Astheproverbsays，nopains，nogains.(北京卷),二、承接——順勢承上又啟下1.常用表達(dá)“承接”的過渡詞語,secondly，inaddition，besides，moreover，whatismore，whatisworse，forexample，inotherwords，especially，particularly，obviously，atthesametime，nodoubtmeanwhile，asaconsequence等。,2.常用表達(dá)“承接”的句型：,(1)Itistruethat...(2)Everybodyknowsthat...(3)Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat...(4)Noonecandenythat...(5)Thereasonwhy...isthat...(6)Thereisnodoubtthat...(7)Totake...forexample(instance)...,(8)Whatismoreseriousisthat...Inaddition，IwillgoonatriptoSichuan，wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.Meanwhile，Iwillregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.Asaconsequence，childrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.,三、轉(zhuǎn)折——利用轉(zhuǎn)折巧過渡1.常用表達(dá)“轉(zhuǎn)折”的過渡詞語,but，however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，inanycase，or，orelse，while，despite，inspiteof，regardlessof，instead等。,2.常用表達(dá)“轉(zhuǎn)折”的句型,(1)Everycoinhastwosides.(2)Butfor...Iwouldnever...(3)Anotherexampleisthat...(4)Takingeverythingintoconsideration...(5)That’swhyIfeelthat...Therewillbemanychallengesahead，butIhaveconfidencethatI’lltakeontheburden.However，itisnotsoeasyforpeopletorealizetheirdreamseverytime.,四、總結(jié)——完美結(jié)束全文常用表達(dá)“總結(jié)”的過渡詞語：inaword，ingeneral，inshort，aboveall，finally，inconclusion，atlast，insummary，asaresult，onthewhole，inone’sopinion等。1.Somethingmustbedoneto...2.Itcanbesafelyconcludedfrom...that...3.Inmyopinion，wecandrawtheconclusionthat...4.Itmaybesummedupasfollows...,常用表達(dá)“總結(jié)”的句型：Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows：it’shightimethatourgovernmenttooksomemeasurestoimproveourenvironment.Inmyopinion，peopleneedtolearntoaccepttherealityandkeepontrying.,[跟蹤訓(xùn)練],Ⅰ.完成句子1._______________________theInternet，putersplayanimportantroleinpeople’slife.2.__________________________________________，themoreyoupractise，themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.3._____________________________，itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.,隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，計(jì)算機(jī)在人們的生活中起著重要作用?？偟膩碚f，你練習(xí)越多，用英語寫作就越熟練。就拿北京來說吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。,Withthedevelopmentof,Generallyspeaking/Onthewhole/Ingeneral,TakeBeijingforexample,4.________________________，ifyouwanttosucceed，youhavetobelieveinyourself.5._____________________________________，Ilovewealth，butIvaluehealthmore.6.________________________________，peopleshallnotsmokeinpublicplaces.7._____________________________________________________，agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.,也就是說，如果你想成功，必須相信自己。就我而言，我喜歡財(cái)富，但我更看重健康。按照我的觀點(diǎn)，人們不應(yīng)該在公共場所抽煙。總之，一個(gè)好市民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。,Thatistosay,AsfarasIamconcerned,Inmyopinion,Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief/Tosumup,8._____________________________________________________，ourclassalsoorganizeavarietyofactivitiestoenrichoursparetime.9._______________________________________，ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones，wewilllosethemunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.,另外，我們班還組織了各種各樣的活動(dòng)來豐富我們的業(yè)余時(shí)間。更糟的是，如果我們?cè)陔娫捝匣ㄙM(fèi)過多的時(shí)間，我們會(huì)失去將來需要的交際技能。,Besides/What’smore/Inaddition/Moreover/Furthermore,Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse,Ⅱ.完成短文1.________，Icollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.2.__________Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.3._____________，Isweptandmoppedthefloors.首先，我把所有的書籍、報(bào)紙和其他的散落在屋子里的東西收集起來放好，然后我掃去所有家具上的灰塵，之后我掃地、拖地。,Firstly,Then,Afterthat,Ⅲ.翻譯句子1.努力學(xué)習(xí)，你就會(huì)升入重點(diǎn)大學(xué)。2.游泳不但對(duì)身體有好處，而且能培養(yǎng)我們的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志。3.然而，使你最驚訝的是下述新的功能。4.相反，智能手機(jī)不僅占用我們寶貴的時(shí)間，而且對(duì)我們的健康造成極大的危害。,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,Workhard，andyouwillbeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.,Swimmingnotonlybenefitsourhealth，butalsohelpsushaveastrongwill.,However，whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunction.,Onthecontrary，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime，butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.,5.多虧醫(yī)生的及時(shí)治療，他獲救了。6.因此，我建議應(yīng)該給我們更多的時(shí)間用于體育運(yùn)動(dòng)和睡眠。7.只要你不灰心，就一定會(huì)成功。8.如果我們忽視我們的未來，就像圖畫中的這個(gè)人一樣，我們就會(huì)以失敗告終。,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________,Thankstothedoctor’stimelytreatment，hewassaved.,Therefore，Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.,Aslongasyoudon’tloseheart，you’resuretosucceed.,Ifweneglectourfuture，we’llendupinfailureaswhathappenstothemaninthepicture.,Ⅳ.用方框內(nèi)的過渡詞完成下面的短文second，so，asaresult，despite，on(the)onehand，what’sworse，insteadof，inaword，ontheotherhand，asiswell-known1.____________________，onlineshoppingisbeingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.2.________________，onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First，onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.3.____________searchingacrowdedstore，wejustneedtowatchtheputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.4.____________，itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedon’thavetospendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Third，wecanseealotofgoodsshownontheputerscreenatthesametime.,,Asiswell-known,Ontheonehand,Insteadof,Second,5.__________________，onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownontheputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.6.____________，wecanbecheatedeasily.7.______________，wecannotseethethingsindetail.8.____________，9.____________thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.10.____________weshoulddevelopit.,Ontheotherhand,Asaresult,What’sworse,Inaword,despite,So,