2019中考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 寫作 關(guān)于plan.doc

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關(guān)于plan 1.寫作步驟：定基調(diào)—列提綱、寫句子—巧銜接—添佳句—成篇章 2.寫作任務(wù): 假如你很有計(jì)劃，執(zhí)行力也很強(qiáng)，在和你的美國(guó)朋友Jane分享了第一個(gè)新年計(jì)劃之后，她表示對(duì)你的其他三個(gè)計(jì)劃也很感興趣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，寫一篇短文介紹你的另外三個(gè)計(jì)劃，并說(shuō)明你打算如何去做以及為什么這么做。 My other three resolutions 1. Improving my physical health 2. Improving my relationships with family and friends 3. Doing better at school 思路點(diǎn)撥: 1.定基調(diào) 體裁：說(shuō)明文 時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主 人稱：介紹自己新年打算做的事情時(shí)用第一人稱。 2.列提綱、寫句子 列提綱 寫句子 計(jì)劃二 My second resolution is about improving my physical health. (1)__________(我打算多吃水果蔬菜、多做運(yùn)動(dòng)) because they are good for my health. 計(jì)劃三 My third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends. ◆My parents both like tennis. (2)__________(我計(jì)劃培養(yǎng)和他們相同的愛(ài)好). Then I can often play tennis with them. Doing more things together will make us all happy. ◆(3)__________(我計(jì)劃更多地關(guān)心并幫助我的朋友們). I hope we will have a better relationship. 計(jì)劃四 My last resolution is about how to do better at school. (4)__________(我打算上課更加認(rèn)真地聽(tīng)講，作業(yè)完成得更好). It can help me get better grades. 表決心 I’m sure I can achieve my resolutions if I try my best! 3.巧銜接 本文要寫三個(gè)新年計(jì)劃，自然會(huì)使用與其語(yǔ)義相關(guān)的詞項(xiàng)，如My resolution is ...，I am going to，It can help me ...的表達(dá)。這也是一種銜接手段，即詞義搭配。此外，文中連用4個(gè)be going to ...結(jié)構(gòu)，表示打算做某事，這是使用平行結(jié)構(gòu)使文章銜接的手段，這樣做能使文章節(jié)奏勻稱、緊致。 4.添佳句 Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 5.成篇章 Hey, Jane! Here I want to share my other three resolutions with you. _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 答案 2.列提綱、寫句子 (1) I am going to eat more fruit and vegetables and play more sports (2) I am going to take up the same hobby as them (3) I am going to care about my friends more and help them more (4) I am going to listen more carefully in class and do my homework better. 5.成篇章 Jane! Here I want to share my other three resolutions with you. My second resolution is about improving my physical health.I am going to eat more fruit and vegetables and play more sports because they are good for my health. My third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends. My parents both like tennis.I am going totake up the same hobby as them. Then I can often play tennis with them. Doing more things together will make us all happy. Also,I am going tocare about my friends more and help them more. I hope we will have a better relationship. My last resolution is about how to do better at school.I am going tolisten more carefully in class and do my homework better. It can help me get better grades. Well, where there is a will, there is a way. I’m sure I can achieve my resolutions if I try my best!