2018-2019學(xué)年高中英語 Module 2 Highlights of My Senior Year寫作園地-事物簡介：理想的高中 外研版選修7.doc

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Module 2 Highlights of My Senior Year 寫作園地-事物簡介：理想的高中 [感悟范文] 某報社正在舉辦征文活動，請你以《我理想的高中生活》為題寫一篇短文，以便投稿。短文內(nèi)容必須包括： 1．你的個人信息：姓名(李萍)、年齡、所在年級和班級、你最喜歡的科目、學(xué)校類型、你認(rèn)為假期多長最為合理。 2．你最喜歡參加什么樣的課外活動小組以及原因。 3．你理想的學(xué)校中最重要的是什么。為什么？ 注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右； 2．參考詞匯：intellectual智力的。 [范文] My Ideal Senior High School Life My name is Li Ping. Im seventeen and Im in Class One，Grade Two of senior high school. I like maths, physics, chemistry and English best. ① I prefer a large school to a small one. ② As far as Im concerned, the vacation should be about a month. I like petitive sports, so I think my ideal high school should have such afterschool clubs as Basketball Club, Debating Club, Running Club ③ and so on. In this way I can not only build my body but also make many friends. In my view, a school should ③ put importance on both the development of social skills and the development of intellectual skills as every student will make a living by themselves in the future. [技法討論] 本文為半開放作文，要求學(xué)生針對題目要求提出自己的觀點。每一段圍繞一個中心，切忌一段話寫到底。 對于此類作文，同學(xué)們要在用詞準(zhǔn)確的基礎(chǔ)上，言之有物，條理清晰，能自圓其說。 寫此類作文時，通常使用一般現(xiàn)在時。 常用句式 1. My ideal senior high school is like this. 2. It should be an individual school. 3. We have a lot of free time to take part in outofclass activities. 4. We can borrow books from the library. 5. There should be many associations. 6. Teachers and students get along well with each other. 黃金表達 1．要點信息 ①與……相比更喜歡…… prefer...to... ②就……而言as far as sb./sth.is concerned ③等等and so on ④在我看來in my view/opinion ⑤把重點放在……上 put importance on... 2．一句多譯 就我而言，假期應(yīng)該是大約一個月。 ①I think we should have a vacation of about a month. ②I think there should be a vacation about a month. ③In my opinion, the vacation should be about a month. ④As far as I am concerned, the vacation should be about a month. 亮點分析： 本文亮點頗多，能按照半開放性作文的要求提出觀點，并論證觀點，實為一篇佳作。 ①正確運用復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)prefer...to...，not only...but also... ②準(zhǔn)確使用了本模塊中所學(xué)的短語as far as Im concerned，達到了學(xué)以致用的目的。 ③and so on, put importance on短語的使用體現(xiàn)了作者較高的寫作水平和語言運用能力。 [類文演練] 學(xué)校最近組織了一次中美學(xué)生交流活動，你參加其中的“大學(xué)校園生活”討論。聽完Mike的發(fā)言之后，你準(zhǔn)備寫一份發(fā)言稿，題目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，內(nèi)容要點包括： 1．以約30個詞概括Mike的發(fā)言要點； 2．然后以約120個詞談?wù)勀憷硐氲拇髮W(xué)生活，內(nèi)容包括： (1)對中學(xué)生活的感受； (2)理想的大學(xué)生活； (3)中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應(yīng)。 [聯(lián)想詞匯] 1. 適應(yīng)，調(diào)節(jié)　　　　　　________________ 答案：adjust to 2. 過著忙碌的生活 ________________ 答案：live a busy life 3. 首先，最重要的是 ________________ 答案：above all 4. 習(xí)慣于 ________________ 答案：get used to 5. 積極參加 ________________ 答案：take an active part in [連詞成句] 1. ________ I dreamed was the exciting life in the college campus. 我所夢想的是大學(xué)校園里令人興奮的生活。 答案：What 2. But I must realize that the life in the high school is different from ________ in the college. 但是我必須要意識到高中的生活與大學(xué)的生活是不同的。 答案：that 3. I must get used to ________things of my own. 我必須習(xí)慣自己處理事情。 答案：handling [連句成章] _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One Possible Version： Preparing Myself for College Life From what Mike said I know that though Mike didnt adjust to his life in the college at first, he has overe the various difficulties and got to enjoy the life in the college. In high school I lived a busy life all the day. I spent most of time studying. Then what I dreamed was the exciting life in the college campus—more good facilities, helpful instructors, and above all, more free time to do what I really like. But I must realize that the life in the high school is different from that in the college. In a new place, everything is strange to me. I must learn to study，learn to live on my own and learn to deal with the problems I meet with in the course of growing. I must get used to handling things of my own. For example, municate with my classmates and teachers, make a plan for my study, and take an active part in the campus activities. I think I can prepare myself for college life.