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1、熱點(diǎn)06 應(yīng)用文（新高考） 命題趨勢(shì) 四1年1考1情 年份 卷別 命題形式 寫作體裁 寫作內(nèi)容 詞數(shù)要求 分值 難度 2021 全國甲卷 提綱 建議信為中國傳統(tǒng)文化節(jié) 100左右 25 中 全國乙卷 提綱 班會(huì)征求意見 建議信學(xué)習(xí)建議 100左右 25 中 新高考全國卷 提綱 為報(bào)刊投稿慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年 80左右 15 難 2020 課標(biāo)全國卷I 讀后續(xù)寫 提綱 記敘文 親情 150左右 記敘文 人物介紹 100左右 25 25 中 易 課標(biāo)全國卷n 提綱 記敘文介紹一次活動(dòng) 100左右 25

2、 易 2019 2018 課標(biāo)全國卷in 課標(biāo)全國卷I 課標(biāo)全國卷II 課標(biāo)全國卷in 課標(biāo)全國卷I 課標(biāo)全國卷n 課標(biāo)全國卷in 提綱 提綱 提綱 提綱 提綱 提綱 提綱 應(yīng)用文寫郵件請(qǐng)外教幫忙 指導(dǎo)英文短劇 100左右 應(yīng)用文寫信中請(qǐng)做中國 畫展志愿者 100左右 應(yīng)用文寫郵件告知 隊(duì)友比賽信息 100左右 應(yīng)用文寫郵件邀請(qǐng)英國 朋友參加音樂節(jié)100左右 應(yīng)用文寫郵件向新西蘭朋友 介紹到中國做客習(xí)俗100左右 應(yīng)用文為校宣傳欄寫一則 觀看英文短片的通知100左右 應(yīng)用文寫信告知英國朋友 25 25 25 25 25 25

3、難 中 中 易 中 難 學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況 100左右 25 中 滿分技巧 “保住基本分，才能得高分”，本句話對(duì)于書面表達(dá)的應(yīng)用文寫作同樣適用。無論是從寫作 體裁角度，還是從寫作內(nèi)容角度來說，寫作首先要確保完成規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)，寫得像模像樣， 抓牢基本保底分；然后在“完成”的基礎(chǔ)上，再潤色完善，寫得瀟瀟灑灑，“洋”氣十足，得高分 甚至創(chuàng)滿分。本專題正是基于這一思路展開編寫設(shè)計(jì)。不但通過“寫作語料庫”的積累讓寫作“有 話可說”，而且通過“亮點(diǎn)技法的點(diǎn)撥”讓寫作“有話會(huì)說”。 九類應(yīng)用文寫作主題的范式建構(gòu)與語料積累 針對(duì)高考?？嫉?大寫作主題進(jìn)行分類點(diǎn)撥訓(xùn)練，旨在讓考生掌握寫作范式

4、，積累寫作 素材，背誦高考范文，力爭應(yīng)用文創(chuàng)滿分。 一人物或活動(dòng)描寫類 熱點(diǎn)解讀 [2020?全國卷I改編]你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請(qǐng)以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫 一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括： 1 .人物簡介； 2 .尊敬和愛戴的原因。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 3 .短文題目和首句已為你寫好。 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. 滿分技巧 滿分作文第一步：“三定”審題“三段”謀篇 （一）“三定”審題 1 .定體裁：本文為人物描寫。 2 .定人稱：本文以第三人稱為主。

5、 3 .定時(shí)態(tài)：主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 （二）“三段”謀篇 第一段（開篇點(diǎn)題）：點(diǎn)名誰是你最愛戴的人及外貌描寫； 第二段（2個(gè)要點(diǎn)，缺一不可）：人物簡介；尊敬和愛戴的原因； 第三段（巧妙收尾）：再次表達(dá)對(duì)他/她的尊敬之情。 滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句設(shè)計(jì)亮點(diǎn) 1 .我最尊敬的人是我的物理老師。 （l）The person（定語從句） ⑵ （主語 從句） 2 .是她的友善和責(zé)任感讓我欽佩她。 （強(qiáng)調(diào) 句型） 3 .她不僅教我們?nèi)绾潍@得知識(shí)，也教我們?nèi)绾纬蔀橐粋€(gè)好人。 She teaches us （not only...but also...) 4 .她為我們學(xué)

6、生樹立了一個(gè)好榜樣，值得我尊敬。 .（分詞 作狀語） 滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡完美成篇 「知識(shí)梳理） 一、人物描寫類 （一）謹(jǐn)記寫作范式 「引入話題（介紹人物的基本情況，如外貌、年齡等） 人物錨寫《具體介紹（包括人物的性格、事跡等） I總結(jié)全文（對(duì)所介紹的人物進(jìn)行整體評(píng)價(jià)） （二）充盈寫作語料庫 1. Among the famous historical figures, I find Confucius impressive. 在著名的歷史人物中，我覺得孔夫子令人印象深刻。 2. It goes without saying that Confucius has a

7、 great effect on the values of later generations. 毋庸置疑，孔子對(duì)后世的價(jià)值觀有很大的影響。 3. [2020?全國卷 I ]Old as Zhong Nanshan is, he fought bravely against COVID-19, making great contributions in the field of medicine.盡管鐘南山年事已高，但他勇敢抗擊新冠肺炎，在醫(yī) 學(xué)領(lǐng)域做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)。 4. Whenever people around get into trouble, she is willing to

8、 help them, which makes her respected by all our neighbours.每當(dāng)周圍的人遇到麻煩，她樂意幫助他們，這使她受到所有鄰 居的尊敬。 5. She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people. 她憑借她的智慧和勇氣受到中國人民的高度尊敬。 限時(shí)檢測(cè) （注意卷面書寫喲） [2021.曲師大附中高三檢測(cè)]在你成長的過程中，總有一個(gè)人對(duì)你的思想和行為產(chǎn)生過重 大的影響。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文介紹這個(gè)人并向校英文報(bào)投稿，內(nèi)容包括

9、： 1 .人物簡介； 2 .對(duì)你的影響； 注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 3 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 二、活 動(dòng)描寫 （一）謹(jǐn)記寫作范式 敘事短文也屬于記敘文的寫作范疇，文章多以事件為中心，以時(shí)間和空間為線索，按事件 的發(fā)生、發(fā)展、結(jié)局展開故事。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為： r點(diǎn)名故事發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的 敘事短文\介紹故事發(fā)展的詳情 .個(gè)人感受 （二）充盈寫作語料庫 活動(dòng)介紹 1. 12021?四川成都一診］In order to show artistic achievements of students and develop our school cultur

10、e, our school successfully held a student art exhibition in our school hall yesterday.為了 展示學(xué)生們的藝術(shù)成就，發(fā)揚(yáng)學(xué)校文化，我校昨天在學(xué)校禮堂成功舉辦了一場學(xué)生藝術(shù)展。 2. ［2021?四川成都一診］First, the schoolmaster gave a speech, and then more than pieces of painting, photography, sculpture, and paper-cut were on show.首先，校長發(fā)表了講話，然后展出 了 許多繪畫、攝

11、影、雕塑和剪紙。 3. 12021 ?泰安二模］Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon, the theme of which is "Love Our Motherland1'.我們學(xué)校在周三下午組織了一場校園合唱比賽，主題 是“愛我們的祖國”。 描寫感受 1. ［2021?陜西省模擬一］By doing interesting experiments myself, I had lots of fun as well as gaining knowledge. 通過親自做有趣的實(shí)驗(yàn)，我既

12、玩的開心也獲得了知識(shí)。 2. Through the activity, I'm aware that I'm able to shoulder the responsibility and be stronger and more determined. 通過這次活動(dòng)，我意識(shí)到自己能夠承擔(dān)起責(zé)任，變得更加堅(jiān)強(qiáng)和堅(jiān)定。 3. There is no denying that the activity is definitely meaningful to us students. 不可否認(rèn)，這個(gè)活動(dòng)對(duì)我們學(xué)生來說絕對(duì)是有意義的。 限時(shí)檢測(cè) (注意卷面書寫喲) [2021?山東日照

13、二模]假定你是李華，上周末你班組織去陽光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home) 參加志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容如下： 1 .活動(dòng)時(shí)間； 2 .活動(dòng)內(nèi)容； 3 .你的感受。 注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右； 4 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 人物或活動(dòng)描寫類 熱點(diǎn)解讀 滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句設(shè)計(jì)亮點(diǎn) 1. (1)1 respect most is my physics teacher. (2)Who I respect most is my physics teacher. 2. Ifs her friendliness and the

14、 sense of responsibility that make me admire her. 3. not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person. 4. Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect. 滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡 完美成篇 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. And the person I

15、 respect most is my physics teacher. She is so patient with each student that we all like her. It's her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on the shoulder and gave me great encouragemen

16、t. She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person. Having set a great example to us students, she fully deserves my respect. 參考范文： The Person Who Influences Me Most Many people has a great influence on me, but I think no one can compare with my mother. Workin

17、g as a civil servant, she works faithfully and devotedly. At the same time, she never puts her family aside. It is my mother who teaches me to be kind , optimistic and persistent. When I come across someone in need, I'm willing to give a helping hand. When I encounter difficulties, I alwaysconstantl

18、y seek for approaches to solving them. She is not only my mother but also my life mentor. Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly. -stte 限時(shí)檢測(cè) 參考范文: Our class went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work last weekend. Upon arrival, we started working at once, cleaning t

19、he windows and sweeping the floor. After that, we shared our fruits with the elderly people and chatted with them. The elderly people thanked us for our kindness, saying they had such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. 1 felt very happy as I brought joy to the elderly people and e

20、nriched my campus life as well. 二演講稿、新聞報(bào)道 [2021?浙江6月卷]昨天你參觀了學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國畫作品展。請(qǐng)給校英文報(bào)寫一篇宣傳 稿，內(nèi)容包括： 1 .展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)； 2 .觀展感受； 3 .推薦觀展。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 )滿分技巧 滿分作文第一步：“五定”審題“三段”謀篇 定體裁 定人稱 定時(shí)態(tài) 定要點(diǎn)、定結(jié)構(gòu) 宣傳稿 第一人稱 一般現(xiàn)在 時(shí)、一般過 去時(shí) 段 謀 篇 第一段 點(diǎn)明寫信目的 第二段 介紹畫展情況及觀展感 受 第三段 推薦觀展及表達(dá)

21、祝愿 滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句設(shè)計(jì)亮點(diǎn) 1 .昨天我和朋友參觀了我們學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國畫展覽。 (l)Yesterday my friends and I . It was held by our school. (2)高級(jí)句式： Yesterday my friends and I visited the students' Chinese painting exhibition held by our school.(利用分詞作定語升級(jí)) 2 .據(jù)我所知，這次展覽將在學(xué)校美術(shù)館持續(xù)一個(gè)月。 in the school art gallery. 3 .最讓我高興的是，他們的

22、藝術(shù)天賦是極其驚人的。(主語從句) their artistic talent is extremely shocking. 4 .我強(qiáng)烈呼吁我們學(xué)校的所有學(xué)生，他們應(yīng)該利用他們的業(yè)余時(shí)間仔細(xì)品嘗這些美妙的 作品。 (1)1 strongly to taste these wonderful works carefully. (2)(高頻短語)1 strongly. 5 .我堅(jiān)信每個(gè)人都會(huì)得到意想不到的快樂。 (1)1 believe every one is sure to receive an unexpected joy. (2)(同 位語從句) 滿分作文第三步：巧

23、妙過渡完美成篇 知識(shí)梳理 一、演講稿 演講稿包括發(fā)言稿、致辭、宣傳稿、競選稿等，該文體通常要有吸引力，明確發(fā)言的對(duì)象。 演講稿在語言使用上一定要準(zhǔn)確簡明、通俗易懂、層次清楚、條理分明。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為： （一）謹(jǐn)記寫作范式 ，稱呼語:最常用的是ladies and gentlemen,也可根據(jù)情況選用my dear friends, hello, everyone 等 演講稿 \具體內(nèi)容：開門見山，提出主題，對(duì)主題要進(jìn)行清楚、客觀內(nèi)容的論述，最后簡明 扼要地總結(jié)發(fā)言 1結(jié)尾： 最常用的結(jié)尾是Thank you for your listening. （二）充盈寫作語料庫 點(diǎn)名目

24、的 1. [2021 ?浙江卷 1 月]Pm Li Hua. Tm honored to be here to extend a warm welcome to you on behalf of our school. 我是李華。我很榮幸能在這里代表我們學(xué)校向你們表示熱烈的歡迎。 2. [2021?天津 3 月卷滿分作文]As a Chinese who is particularly interested in travelling, I would like to introduce my favorite city一Beijing.作為一個(gè)對(duì)旅游特別感興趣的中國人，我想向 你介紹我

25、最喜歡的城市——北京。 3. [2021?全國卷 I 滿分作文]Online learning has become an important way to learn recently. However, online learning has both advantages and disadvantages.網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)成為一種重要的學(xué) 習(xí)方式。然而，在線學(xué)習(xí)有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn)。 介紹基本情況 1. [2021 ,天津 3 月卷滿分作文]Firstly, Beijing is the capital of China. Besides, Beijing is not only the

26、political center but also the economic center of our country. More importantly 9 it is the famous tourist spots of Beijing that attract a large number of tourists from all over the world every year.首先，北京是中國的首都。此外，北京不僅是我國的政治中心，也是我國的經(jīng)濟(jì)中心。更 重要的是，北京的著名旅游景點(diǎn)每年都吸引著大量來自世界各地的游客。 2. [2021?全國卷 I 滿分作文]Its adva

27、ntages are obvious. It allows us to learn at any time wherever we are. Besides, we can absorb all kinds of resources to learn more efficiently.它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是 顯而易見的。它讓我們可以隨時(shí)隨地學(xué)習(xí)。此外，我們可以吸收各種資源來更有效地學(xué)習(xí)。 3. [2021 ?全 國卷 I ：黃分作文]Howe ver, its disadvantages cannot be ignored. Staring at the screen is harmful to our

28、 eyes. Worse still, we don't have many opportunities to interact with our teachers and classmates. 然而，它的缺點(diǎn)也不容忽視。盯著屏幕對(duì)我們的眼睛有害。更糟糕的是，我們沒有很多 機(jī)會(huì)與老師和同學(xué)互動(dòng)。 4. [2021 ?鷹潭市一模]It is known to all that good living habits are important to our physical and mental health. 眾所周知，良好的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)我們的身體和心理健康很重要。 總結(jié)感想和祝愿 1

29、. [2021 ?河北邯鄲高三第二次模擬]In conclusion, to realize a dream is not that easy, so we must study hard to fulfill our dreams.總之，實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想不是那么容易的，所以我們必須努力學(xué)習(xí)來 實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的夢(mèng)想。 2. [2021?南通市 5 月考前練習(xí)]The earth is our common home. Let*s take action to build a better one for all of us! 地球是我們共同的家園。讓我們采取行動(dòng)，為我們所有人建立一個(gè)更好的世界！ 3.

30、 [2021?鷹潭市一模]Thank you for your listening (to my speech).感謝大家傾聽我的演 講。 限時(shí)檢測(cè) L — 一 —」 (注意卷面書寫喲) [2021?江蘇省南通市考前練習(xí)]假定你是李華。6月5日是世界環(huán)境日(World Environment Day),你校將開展一次以“Building a better home”為題的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇演講稿， 內(nèi)容包括： 1 .世界環(huán)境日的宗旨； 2 .你的做法； 3 .你的呼吁。 注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右； 4 .請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。 二、新聞報(bào)道 （一）謹(jǐn)記寫作范式

31、 新聞報(bào)道，就是對(duì)新近發(fā)生的事實(shí)的報(bào)道。新聞是對(duì)客觀事實(shí)進(jìn)行報(bào)道而形成的信息，反 映在新聞信息中的內(nèi)容必須具有真實(shí)性和可傳達(dá)性，即用事實(shí)說話。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為： 「標(biāo)題：新聞的題目 新聞報(bào)道\導(dǎo)語：揭示出新聞的核心內(nèi)容主體：對(duì)導(dǎo)語內(nèi)容進(jìn)一步展開和闡釋 1結(jié)語：對(duì)全文內(nèi)容作概括性總結(jié) （二）充盈寫作語料庫 1 . [2021 ?蕪湖市教學(xué)質(zhì)量檢測(cè)]To relieve students* pressure from heavy study and inspire them to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a hiking a

32、ctivity on May Day. 為了減輕學(xué)生繁重的學(xué)習(xí)壓力，鼓勵(lì)他們多做戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們學(xué)校在五一組織了一次徒步 旅行活動(dòng)。 2 . [2021?廈門外國語學(xué)校第五次適應(yīng)性考試]To encourage students to take an interest in space exploration, this year's theme of our annual school Science Festival was “Space”. 為了鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生對(duì)太空探索的興趣，今年我們一年一度的學(xué)?？茖W(xué)節(jié)的主題是“太空 3 .[2021 ?廈門外國語學(xué)校第五次適應(yīng)性考試]On Monda

33、y afternoon, we attended a lecture about whether life can exist on other planets.星期一下午，我們參加了 一場關(guān)于是否有生命存在于 其他星球的講座。 4 . [2021?廈門外國語學(xué)校第五次適應(yīng)性考試]In Thursday's Science Workshop, students tried different experiments with great interest. 在周四的科學(xué)研討會(huì)，學(xué)生們非常有興趣地嘗試了不同的實(shí)驗(yàn)。 5 .[2021?廈門外國語學(xué)校第五次適應(yīng)性考試]0n Friday af

34、ternoon, every class decorated their classroom and designed activities according to the theme of space. 周五下午，每個(gè)班級(jí)都根據(jù)太空的主題布置教室，設(shè)計(jì)活動(dòng)。 6 .[2021?廈門外國語學(xué)校第五次適應(yīng)性考試]The festival attracted much interest from students and everyone is looking forward to next year's Science Festival這個(gè)節(jié)日吸引 了很多學(xué)生 的興趣，每個(gè)人都期待著明年的

35、科學(xué)節(jié)。 7 .[2020?新高考全國卷 I 滿分作文]In order to enrich our campus life, our school organized a 5km cross-country running race last Sunday. 為了豐富我們的校園生活，我校于上周日組織了一場5公里越野跑比賽。 8 . [2021 ?荷澤一模]It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised. 正是通過這

36、次活動(dòng)，我們充分認(rèn)識(shí)到應(yīng)該提高尊老意識(shí)。 限時(shí)檢測(cè) （注意卷面書寫喲） [2021?江蘇省常熟中學(xué)三模]假如你是李華，上星期四你班舉行了一個(gè)關(guān)于感恩父母的主題 班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括。 1 .班會(huì)目的； 2 .班會(huì)過程； 3 .班會(huì)反響。 注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右； 4 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 A Theme Class Meeting 二演講稿、新聞報(bào)道 滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句設(shè)計(jì)亮點(diǎn) 1. (l)visited the students* Chinese painting exhibition 2. As far

37、as I know this exhibition will last for a month 3. What pleases me most is that 4. (l)call on all the students in our school to make use of their spare time (2)appeal to all the students in our school to make use of their spare time to taste these wonderful works carefully 5. (2)1 hold the firm

38、belief that every one is bound to receive an unexpected joy. 滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡完美成篇 Yesterday my friends and I visited the students* Chinese painting exhibition held by our school. As far as I know, this exhibition will last for a month in the school art gallery. What pleases me most was that their art

39、istic talent was extremely shocking. Therefore, I strongly appeal to all the students to make use of their spare time to taste these wonderful works carefully. I highly recommend that you should spare some time to visit the students* Chinese painting exhibition . I hold the firm belief that every o

40、ne is bound to receive an unexpected joy. 參考范文： Dear teachers and fellow students, World Environment Day is marked on June 5 every year, which aims to encourage awareness and action for the protection of the environment. To answer its call, I go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking

41、 the bus. At home I turn off the tap while brushing my teeth. Besides, 1 often donate the used textbooks to the students of lower grades. 1 believe all these steps taken can help lower my impact on the environment. The earth is our common home. Let*s take action to build a better one for all of us!

42、 That's all. Thank you! Jir 一 限時(shí)檢測(cè) 參考范文： A Theme Class Meeting To enhance the students* awareness of gratitude, Class 5 Senior 3 held a theme class meeting on being grateful to our parents last Thursday. The class meeting, composed of three parts, began with a touching video about a girl tend

43、ing her sick mother. After that, we talked about the topic freely in groups. Finally, some students shared their personal feelings and experiences in front of the class, which impressed us deeply. Through the class meeting, not only do we better understand our parents' hardships in raising us, but

44、also we're determined to repay them with practical actions. 三通知&告知 熱點(diǎn)解讀 [2021.沈陽市質(zhì)量監(jiān)測(cè)三]假設(shè)你是國際學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校決定本周五在教學(xué)樓舉 行一次緊急疏散演練(emergency evacuation drill),請(qǐng)用英語寫一則書面通知，內(nèi)容包括： 1 .演練目的； 2 .具體安排； 3 .注意事項(xiàng)。 注意： 1 .寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右； 2 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3 .請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。 NOTICE Student Union ］滿分技巧） 滿分作文第一步

45、：“五定”審題“三段”謀篇 定體裁 定人稱 定時(shí)態(tài) 定要點(diǎn)、定結(jié)構(gòu) 通知 第三人 稱、第二 人稱 一般現(xiàn)在 時(shí)、一般將 來時(shí) 三段 謀篇 第一段 點(diǎn)明演練目的 第二段 介紹具體安排及注意事 項(xiàng) 第三段 表達(dá)希望 滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句設(shè)計(jì)亮點(diǎn) 1 .為了更好地做好面對(duì)危險(xiǎn)的準(zhǔn)備，學(xué)生會(huì)打算在本周五下午3點(diǎn)在我們的教學(xué)樓組織 一次緊急疏散演習(xí)。（不定式作目的狀語） , the Student Union intend to organize an emergency evacuation drill at 3 p. m. this Friday in ou

46、r teaching building. 2 .我們將為參與者安排許多實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。 We will for the participants. 3 .你不僅可以了解火災(zāi)和其他緊急情況下的疏散路線，還可以接受急救培訓(xùn)。 （l）You can learn about the evacuation routes in case of fire. You can also get trained in first aid. 2 2）.（用 not only...but also 合并，升級(jí)為 倒裝句型） 4 .積極的態(tài)度，清晰的頭腦和生存技能將拯救你的生命，我們保證你不會(huì)感到失望。 Pos

47、itive attitude, clear mind and survival skills will save your life and 5 .不要錯(cuò)過這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)，一定要準(zhǔn)時(shí)參加我們的演習(xí)。 滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡完美成篇 , dSi- 一 知識(shí)梳理 」 —- ， 一、通知 通知是上級(jí)對(duì)下級(jí)、組織對(duì)成員布置工作、傳達(dá)情況或告訴公眾某件事情等情況時(shí)使用的 一種應(yīng)用文體，通常分為口頭通知和書面通知兩種。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為： （一）謹(jǐn)記寫作范式 「明確通知形式：口頭通知/書面通知 通知1通知內(nèi)容：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事由、注意事項(xiàng)等 I結(jié)束語 （二）充盈寫作語料庫 吸引閱卷人開

48、頭句 1. Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 女士們先生們，請(qǐng)大家注意一下？我要宣布一件事。 2. Attention, please. I have something important to tell you. 請(qǐng)注意。我有重要的事要告訴你。 吸引閱卷人篇中句 1. [2021 ?四川內(nèi)江市三模]We regret to inform you that we have to put off the sports meeting to

49、be held this Friday for foreign students.我們很遺憾地通知你，我們不得不推遲本周五舉行的外 國學(xué)生運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。 2. As arranged, the film is to be shown in the school hall from 2： 00 to 3： 00 this Friday afternoon.根據(jù)安排，這部電影將于本周五下午2點(diǎn)到3點(diǎn)在學(xué)校大廳上映。 吸引閱卷人結(jié)尾句 1. Please attend it on time and don't be late. 請(qǐng)按時(shí)參加，不要遲到。 2. Hopefully, you can

50、send your advice or opinions to us by the school QQ or WeChat at your earliest convenience. 希望您可以在方便的時(shí)候通過學(xué)校QQ或微信發(fā)送您的建議或意見給我們。 3. [2021 ?煙臺(tái)高三模擬]Everyone is welcome to take part in it.歡迎所有人參加。 限時(shí)檢測(cè) （注意卷面書寫喲） [2021.青島市高三自主檢測(cè)]假定你是李華，你校將在端午節(jié)期間組織一次去敬老院的志愿 者活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)用英語給你校外國留學(xué)生寫一個(gè)通知，內(nèi)容包括： 1 .活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)； 2 .

51、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 3 .請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。 二、告 告知分為兩類： 1 .告知某人有某事將要發(fā)生； 2 .回復(fù)某人關(guān)于某事的詢問。 （一）謹(jǐn)記寫作范式 「說明寫信目的，告知某人某事 告知信\相關(guān)事宜 I期盼回復(fù) （二）充盈寫作語料庫 吸引閱卷人開頭句 1. [2021?廣東佛山質(zhì)檢]I'm writing to inform you of the school's class schedule adjustment during the coming Labor Day holiday. 在即將到來的五一假期，我寫信通知您學(xué)校的課表調(diào)整。 2

52、. Here is a piece of good news! /I have a piece of good news to tell you! 這里有一條好消息！/我有一條好消息要告訴你！ 吸引閱卷人篇中句 1. [2021 ,廣東佛山質(zhì)檢]Please remember to read the attached file and make sure you know about the new class arrangement in advance. 請(qǐng)記得閱讀附件，并確保您提前知道新的上課安排。 2. [2021?呼和浩特市第一次調(diào)研]What's more, inspir

53、ed by the activity, students will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland. 更重要的是，在活動(dòng)的啟發(fā)下，學(xué)生們將表達(dá)對(duì)國家的熱愛，以及努力學(xué)習(xí)、為祖國做出 貢獻(xiàn)的決心。 吸引閱卷人結(jié)尾句 1. If you want to know anything else, please don't hesitate to contact me.如

54、果你還想知道 什么，請(qǐng)不要猶豫與我聯(lián)系。 2. Hopefully, our efforts will pay off in the end. 希望我們的努力最終會(huì)有回報(bào)。 限時(shí)檢測(cè) （注意卷面書寫喲） [2021.華師附中綜合測(cè)試]假定你是校足球隊(duì)隊(duì)長李華。你校將與到訪的國際學(xué)校足球隊(duì)進(jìn) 行一場友誼賽（a friendly game）,請(qǐng)寫封郵件告知對(duì)方球隊(duì)隊(duì)長Jim相關(guān)的安排。內(nèi)容包括： 1 .表示歡迎； 2 .相關(guān)安排（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，賽后安排等）； 3 .表達(dá)期待。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 4 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Dear Jim, Yours s

55、incerely, Li Hua 三通知&告知 熱點(diǎn)解讀 滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句設(shè)計(jì)亮點(diǎn) 1. In order to get better prepared in face of clanger 2. arrange a variety of practical activities 3. (2)Not only can you learn about the evacuation routes in case of fire and other emergencies, but also you can get trained in first aid 4. we pro

56、mise you will not feel disappointed 5. Don't miss the chance and be sure to be punctual for our drill 滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡 完美成篇 NOTICE In order to get better prepared in face of danger, the Student Union intends to organize an emergency evacuation drill at 3 p. m. this Friday in our teaching building.

57、We will arrange many practical activities for the participants. Not only can you learn about the evacuation routes in case of fire and other emergencies, but also you can get trained in first aid. Positive attitude, clear mind and survival skills will save your life and we promise you will not feel

58、disappointed. Please join us. Don*t miss the chance and be sure to be punctual for our drill. Student Union 限時(shí)檢測(cè) 參考范文： Notice I am writing to tell you that there will be a volunteer activity held by our school from 8.am to 3.pm during the Dragon-Boat Festival. Happiness Nursing Home which is n

59、ext to our school is our destination. After arriving there, we will clean the windows and sweep the floor for them. Then some of us will perform activities for them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us will read newspaper for them. From this meaningful activity, we will know that we shoul

60、d treat our own grandparents more kindly. Anyone who is interested in it will be welcomed. 限時(shí)檢測(cè) 參考?xì)镂模? Dear Jim, As captain of our school football team, I'm delighted to learn you're coming to play a friendly game against us. I'd like to inform you of some relevant information. The match will b

61、e held on June 10 at our school stadium, followed up with a party, where we can interact with each other and improve our understanding of each other. I believe the day will be a cross-cultural feast, where our players can enjoy the game to the fullest and develop sportsmanship. Looking forward to o

62、ur competition and cooperation. For any further information, please don't hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely^ 四 請(qǐng)求幫助&表達(dá)祝賀 熱點(diǎn)解讀 [2020.全國卷HI改編]假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教Miss Evans寫封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括： 1 .劇情簡介； 2 .指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容； 3 .商定時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)。 注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右； 4 .結(jié)束語已為你寫好。 I'm looking forward to your r

63、eply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 滿分技巧 滿分作文第一步：“三定”審題“三段”謀篇 （一）“三定”審題 1 .定體裁：本文為求助信。 2 .定人稱：本文以第一人稱為主。 3 .定時(shí)態(tài)：主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 （二）“三段”謀篇 第一段（開篇點(diǎn)題）：點(diǎn)名寫信目的; 第二段（3個(gè)要點(diǎn)，缺一不可）：劇情簡介；指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；商定時(shí)間和地點(diǎn); 第三段（巧妙收尾）：表達(dá)期待。 滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句設(shè)計(jì)亮點(diǎn) 1 .我寫信是想請(qǐng)您指導(dǎo)一部根據(jù)我們的一篇課文改編的短劇 （高頻 詞匯+定語從句+被動(dòng)語態(tài)） 2 .這篇課文講述了一個(gè)名叫黛西的女孩

64、的故事，她和一些野生動(dòng)物交談，并下定決心幫 助保護(hù)環(huán)境。 （非謂 語動(dòng)詞作定語+定語從句） 3 .如果您方便的話，我們可以在本周日早上8點(diǎn)在我們學(xué)校的藝術(shù)大廳見面嗎？ （l）Could we meet in our school art hall at 8 ： （X） am this Sunday ?（高頻詞匯） （2）Could we meet in our school art hall at 8 ： （X） am this Sunday ? （if條件狀語從句） 4 .我們真誠地希望你能幫我們這個(gè)忙，幫助我們提高演技。 We sincerely hope you c

65、an.（詞匯不重， 彰顯水準(zhǔn)） 滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡完美成篇 知識(shí)梳理 一、請(qǐng)求幫助 求助信是針對(duì)自己目前遇到的困難寫信請(qǐng)求對(duì)方給予幫助的信件類型，因此整篇文章應(yīng)用 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 （一）謹(jǐn)記寫作范式 r開門見山表明求助意圖（針對(duì)陌生對(duì)象需自我介紹） 求助信J求助事由 期盼回復(fù)并表示感謝 （二）充盈寫作語料庫 吸引閱卷人開頭句 1. The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now.我給你寫信的原因是我和我的朋友露西吵架了，

66、我現(xiàn)在需要你的幫助。 2. [2021-1 月新高考八省聯(lián)考]An English Poetry Reading Contest will be held next weekend in our school. I am eager to have a try, so Pm writing to turn to you for help. 下周末我們學(xué)校將舉行一場英語詩歌朗誦比賽。我渴望嘗試一下，所以我寫信向你尋求幫 助。 吸引閱卷人篇中句 1. [2021 ? 1 月新高考八省聯(lián)考]To start with, would you please be so kind to give me some recommendations on which poem to choose?首先，你能給我推薦一首詩嗎？ 2. [2021 1 月新高考八省聯(lián)考]Besides, what I need are the skills of recitation, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my per