九年級英語unit6作文指導(dǎo)及范文

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1、Unit 6 I like music that I can dance to 【單元話題分析】 生活中，每個人都有自己的愛好。 中學(xué)生關(guān)于愛好的交流非常常見，是一個十分重要的內(nèi)容。 即使同樣喜歡聽音樂的人，也會有不同的偏愛，有的喜歡古典音樂，而有點喜歡流行音樂。本單元談?wù)摰脑掝}就是談?wù)搨€人偏愛（preferences）。 興趣與愛好（Interests and Hobbies）這一話題是《英語課程標準》要求初中學(xué)生掌握的重點話題之一，也是這些年來各省、市地區(qū)中考命題的熱點話題。它涉及到的內(nèi)容廣泛，如體育運動、美術(shù)、音樂、旅游、集郵、繪畫、收藏、爬山、垂釣、看書等。本單元話題是在初二年

2、級談?wù)撆d趣愛好的基礎(chǔ)進一步深入，幫助同學(xué)們更加精準、深刻的談?wù)撟约旱呐d趣愛好，說出自己的興趣愛好和它給你帶來的無窮樂趣，感悟生活的愉悅與精彩。 該話題的命題形式通常采用 “Guided writing”形式，有中、英文提示的形式，有圖畫、圖表形式等。通常采用記敘或描述性話題作文形式， 寫該話題時要注意文體，通過聯(lián)想將這些畫面的直觀內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)換成傳神達意的文字形式，用于反映圖中所表現(xiàn)的思想內(nèi)容。 寫作時要重點突出，確定好人稱和時態(tài) ，記住一些固定的習(xí)語和句式的使用，培養(yǎng)遣詞找句的能力并背誦大量范文,達到熟悉這些地道的句子結(jié)構(gòu)。 【寫作指導(dǎo)】 1. 寫作本話題常用的句型有： I like

3、music that I can dance to. My favorite music is… I prefer … music. I like singers who write their own songs. I like groups that play quite and gentle songs. It makes me… It helps me to… It is good for… 2. 開篇展示文章的主題，說清自己的愛好或偏愛是什么，下面的敘述內(nèi)容就要圍繞這個中心話題展開。 3. 本單元話題談?wù)摰氖桥d趣與愛好的日常話題，因此一般選用一般現(xiàn)在時。表示興趣

4、愛好的持續(xù)，則用現(xiàn)在完成進行時，它通常和“for+段時間”或“since+點時間(也可以是從句)”的時間狀語連用。 4. 提示性作文一定要按照題目要求去寫，要做到內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，段落清楚。 5. 注意連詞、代詞的使用，行文連貫流暢，表意清楚。 【佳篇欣賞】 A I like music that is quiet and gentle. When I am stressed out, I always listen to music to relax myself. My favorite music is country. This music is great，becaus

5、e it has great lyrics. I don’t like music that is too loud. I can’t stand rock music. As for musicians, I prefer musicians who can write their original lyrics and I like singers who can sing the words clearly. So Jay Chou isn’t my favorite though he is great. My favorite singer is John Denver. You c

6、an listen to his songs at night with your bedroom light on. He is really wonderful, I think. B Different preferences bring about problems My brother and I like music very much. It seems that we have the same hobby. Actually, we also have a problem. I like music that is gentle and quite. My broth

7、er likes music that is loud and energetic. I always feel a bit tired after school, so I usually play Bandari’s CD to get relaxed. While my brother doesn’t like it, he says the music that I like makes him feel like sleeping. Whenever I play the CD，he would ask me to turn off the recorder. If I don’

8、t agree, he will be angry with me. When I take out My CD, he will play his Rock-and-roll music very loud. Then he won’t listen to anybody speaking. I just can’t stand noisy music. But I don’t want to argue with him. I came up with an idea to solve the problem. I will buy a pair of headphones for my

9、 brother as a birthday gift. C My Favorite Books I like reading very much.，and I enjoy reading books that tell magic stories. Of course, Harry Potter series are my favorite books. In books, there are many unbelievable things. The imagination is really great. In the books, there are many s

10、trange animals, the brooms that can fly，magic hats and magic wands. When I was a child, I really wanted to have a kind of magic power, then I can do every thing. Harry’s magic world is every child’s dream. That is why teenagers are crazy about the books and it’s movies. In the books, Harry Potte

11、r is a courageous, honest and confident boy，and he is handsome. I like him very much, and I can learn something from him. Every teenager wants to be friends with him Now the new book is going to come out. I can’t wait to read it. 【重點結(jié)構(gòu)和句型展示】 A．原汁原味（課本重點結(jié)構(gòu)和句型） 1. I like music that I can dance

12、 to. 我喜歡能跟著跳舞的音樂。 2. I prefer music that has great lyrics. 我更喜歡歌詞很棒的歌曲。 3. I like musicians who write their own songs. 我喜歡能自己寫歌的音樂家。 4. The music reminds me of Brazilian dance music. 這音樂讓我想起了巴西舞曲。 5. What do you think of it? 你認為它怎么樣？ 6. I can’t stand music that is too loud. 我不能忍受太喧鬧的音樂。 7. ..

13、.they don’t interest me as much. ……它們同樣喚不起我的興趣。 8. I prefer quiet, traditional music so the concert suited me just fine.我更愿意聽安靜的傳統(tǒng)的音樂，因此音樂會更適合我的胃口。 B．精彩例句拓展 1. My father prefers swimming to playing basketball. 我爸爸喜歡游泳，而不喜歡打籃球。 We prefer living in the suburbs. 我們寧愿住在郊區(qū)。 I prefer to stay at home

14、rather than go to the noisy party. 我寧愿呆在家里，也不愿去參加那嘈雜的聚會。 2. I like singers who sing clearly. 我喜歡吐字清楚的歌手。 3. The pictures remind me of my school days. 這些照片使我想起了我的學(xué)生時代。 Remind me to write to Mother. 提醒我給媽媽寫信。 4. How do you like the fish? 你覺得這魚如何？ 5. Can you stand the pain? 你受得了這疼痛嗎？ 6. The sto

15、ry does not interest me. 這故事引不起我的興趣。 7. The dress suits me well. 這衣服很合我身。 【原創(chuàng)習(xí)作點評】 假如你叫Li Ming, 是一名中學(xué)生，經(jīng)常收聽由英國主持人Philip主持的音樂節(jié)目。請給據(jù)內(nèi)容要點提示，用英語給主持人寫一封信。 內(nèi)容要點：1. 你很喜歡這個節(jié)目，特別是節(jié)目播放的歌詞很棒的英語歌曲； 2. 你學(xué)習(xí)很忙，疲勞時，會打開收音機聽這個節(jié)目； 3. 從節(jié)目中你學(xué)到了很多新單詞……； 4. 告訴你最喜歡什么類型的音樂，請他幫你介紹一些

16、相關(guān)的歌手和CD。 要求：1.意思連貫，符合邏輯，書信格式正確。 2. 不要直接翻譯內(nèi)容提示。 分析： 這是一片提示性作文。要求寫四個方面的內(nèi)容。寫作前應(yīng)仔細審題，將這四個方面進行整合，可分三個層次來寫：一、表達對節(jié)目的喜愛；二、節(jié)目對自己的幫助；三、請主持人給你介紹你所喜歡的音樂類型的歌手和CD。 在寫作主要內(nèi)容之前要用一兩句話簡單的較少一下自己。然后有條理的把主要內(nèi)容呈現(xiàn)出來，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞或表示過渡的詞組。為了是習(xí)作更加飽滿，可是適當增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容。寫作時要注意書信的格式。 習(xí)作 1： Dear Philip, My name is Li Mi

17、ng. I am a middle school student. I like listening to music, so I often listen to your program at night, and I like it very much, especially the English songs. I like English songs that have great lyrics. As a student, I am busy with my schoolwork. Every night, I will turn on the radio and list

18、en to your program when I feel tired. It helps me relax myself. By the way, I have learnt many English words from these songs，and I get to know many good singers from American and England. At last, I like singers who can sing clearly and write their own songs. It is better if they can play the g

19、uitar well. Can you introduce me some singers and their CDs? You can send me e-mail at liming@. I am looking forward to you. Thank you very much! Yours Li Ming 教師點評 這是一篇優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生習(xí)作。 得分點 （1）書信格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，層次清楚。 （2）適當?shù)脑黾恿瞬糠旨毠?jié)，能恰當使用so, and, by the way, at last等詞和短語，作文自然流暢。 （3）用詞恰當，沒有出現(xiàn)語法及詞匯方面的

20、錯誤。 習(xí)作 2： Dear Philip①： My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I like music very much, so I like ②listen to your radio program. I like English songs that have great lyrics. I am busy with my study. When I feel tired after I finish my homework, I will listen to your program. I

21、t’s relaxing. I learnt some English words from your program. I also learnt how to relax when I feel tired. I like music that is gentle and quiet. Can you tell me some singers and CDs? Thank you! Yours Li Ming 教師點評 這是一篇中檔的學(xué)生習(xí)作。 得分點 ①能按要求寫作，內(nèi)容完整。 ②語言錯誤較少。 失分點 （1）句型和用詞簡單。 （2）內(nèi)容表達生硬，過渡不自然

22、。 ①此處標點符號使用有誤。英語書信稱呼后使用逗號。 ②此處應(yīng)為listening, 固定搭配like doing。 【拓展練筆】 1. 每個人都有自己的愛好，請按下面的提示寫一篇作文，題目自擬。 提示：1. 你的愛好是什么。 2. 為什么有這種愛好。 3. 簡單敘述一下這種愛好給你帶來的好處。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

23、___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: My hobby Basket

24、ball is my favorite sport. It is one of the most popular sports all over the world. Playing basketball is good for our health. I like games that are easy to play with my friends. Basketball is my best choice. I play basketball with my friends every weekend. I like basketball because it makes me hap

25、py and helps me keep fit. Nowadays, many boys are playing the game. While playing basketball, I can make a lot of friends. I have learnt how to work with my pardoners. Basketball also makes me more confident and outgoing. Now I am on the school team. I am trying my best to play it well. I hope tha

26、t one day I can be a big star like Yao Ming. 2、為了解本校學(xué)生的興趣愛好，校學(xué)生會主辦的英文報紙舉行了一次征文活動。請以“I Love…”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你所喜歡的人或事。 要求：1. 文章題目自擬。寫出你喜歡某事或某人的原因，并對該人或事做簡單介紹。 2. 語言流暢，意思連貫。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

27、_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: I

28、 Love Computer I love computer very much, because it is very useful in my life. I can surf the Internet to look for useful information. It is more convenient than using books. So I like websites that provide information for middle school students. I can read e-books on computer. I not only look

29、at the words but also listen to the sound. In this way, I can learn English after school by myself easily. Modern people even can’t do their job well without computers. We know that computers can help people do many things today. For example, they can help store data for a long time. Scientists us

30、e computers to solve difficult problems. Musicians use them to make records. I am sure computers will be a very important part of people’s lives. 3、為了準備下周的討論課， 英語老師布置了以“What kind of music do you like best?”為主題的課外調(diào)查活動。下面是你在學(xué)校調(diào)查后整理的調(diào)查結(jié)果。請根據(jù)此表寫一份報告，并簡要分析原因,談?wù)勛约簩φ{(diào)查結(jié)果的看法。 類型 古典樂 流行音樂 搖滾樂 舞曲 百分比

31、10% 55% 20% 15% ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

32、______________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: My survey is about what kind of music you like best. Fifty students from Junior Three answered my question. Here is the result of my survey. 10% of the

33、 students like classical music. They say they like music that is gentle and quiet. It helps them to relax themselves. 55% of the students like pop music. Most of them like music that they can sing along with. Pop songs are easy to learn for middle school students. 20% of the students like listening

34、 to rock-and-roll music. Most of them are boys. This kind of music is loud and energetic. It just suits wild boys fine. 15% of the students like dance music because they are taking dance classes in their spare time. According the result, most students like pop music, but only a few students like classical music. I think young students should learn to listen and enjoy classical music, because it’s one of the best parts of human culture. Schools should teach them how to appreciate it. 5