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2019-2020年高考英語 寫作指導篇二輪復習教案 　　1. 首先要認真審題。讀懂題目所給信息，初步確定要點內(nèi)容，并可用序號標出以免遺忘。 　　2. 列題綱使要點條理化，有序化，統(tǒng)籌安排布局。 　　3. 勿要直譯，需意譯。尤其對看圖情景作文要構(gòu)建完整故事結(jié)構(gòu)，不可逐句羅列了事。 　　4. 要刻意把好語言關(guān)。要用自己最熟悉的句型結(jié)構(gòu)和詞語，力求文理通順，語言準確。沒有把握的詞句不要寫，確有把握的的可以錦上添花。 　　5. 遇到一時想不起的詞語，需變通?？梢杂猛x近義詞代替，也可以用否定詞加反義詞來表達，亦可變換句式。不可鉆牛角尖，更不能生造詞語，漢化表達。 　　6. 注意文章的長度?？淳唧w內(nèi)容而定，如果內(nèi)容多應多用復雜句式，如果內(nèi)容不多，為了達到詞的限數(shù)應多用簡單句式，并適當增補合理內(nèi)容。 　　7. 注意保持卷面整潔，書寫工整清楚。書寫的好壞會直接影響閱卷老師的情緒。 8. 最后應注意復查全文?？磧?nèi)容要點有無遺漏，標點、格式、大小寫是否規(guī)范，是否有語病等。 總之，要心有全局。英文寫作如果結(jié)構(gòu)意識良好，應試寫作就簡化成為一個填空的過程了，適當?shù)靥钊胗^點、素材，文章就自然而然立起來了。臨考在即，同學們要牢記英語寫作的基本要領(lǐng)，特編順口溜如下：細審題，巧構(gòu)思，列要點，防遺漏。寫日記，同漢語；書信、通知格式要牢記?？辞鍒D表細梳理，寫人記事按順序；完稿后查遺漏，整潔干凈莫忘記。 英語作文寫作的步驟 　 由于時間限制，高考時一般在30分鐘內(nèi)必須完成英語作文。高考的英語作文步驟如下： 　　1. 作文動筆之前一般都要先打腹稿。在確立中心上、運用材料上、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)上，充分醞釀。 　　2. 考慮好想寫多少句子，該用哪些動詞和詞組等。 　　3. 邊寫邊思考內(nèi)容的連貫性，語言和句子的準確性。 4. 寫完后一定要再細看一遍。 如何沖刺英語寫作 　　1. 重視增加閱讀量是提高英語寫作的途徑之一 　　目前，考生在進行大量閱讀的同時，應注重所讀材料的文章結(jié)構(gòu)以及連接詞的運用（on the other hand, however, furthermore）、作者的表達方式（詞匯、習慣用語和典型句子的使用）、作者是如何進行敘述和議論的。 　　2. 在教師的指導下，平時應勤寫多練 　　練習寫作應從基本功抓起。在中譯英翻譯訓練過程中，加強積累適量的詞匯、詞組和增加各種類型句子的運用。把握好各種句型和詞匯的搭配，并從各類題材和體裁著手，多閱讀好的范文。然后模仿寫作，作文寫好之后，一般都要修改。第一遍收筆后，先看一看結(jié)構(gòu)，然后從字詞上推敲，使文章“充實”起來。更重要的是經(jīng)老師修改過的作文一定要仔細地看一至兩遍，然后再認真地抄寫一遍，收獲將會很大。 第四部分：寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分45分） 第一節(jié)：閱讀表達（共5小題；每小題3分，共15分） 閱讀下面短文，請根據(jù)短文后的要求進行答題。（請注意問題后的字數(shù)要求） Dear Sirs, Your shipment of 12,000 “Smart” watches was received by our pany this morning. However, we wish to make a number of plaints concerning the serious delay in delivery and your failure to carry out our instructions with regard to this order. It was stressed from the beginning that the date had to be less than six weeks from the initial order in order to meet with our own customer’s requirements. While we appreciate that delays in production are at times unavoidable, we must point out that we were promised the immediate shipment. Late delivery of the goods has caused us to disappoint several of our most valued customers and is bound to have an adverse effect on potential future orders. The second plaint concerns the difference in colour. It was stated clearly in the original order that watches in binations of green / purple and orange / purple only were required, but only half of them are of the colours specified. Our Hong Kong agent assures us that she stressed to you the importance of following our instructions precisely, since we consider there to be limited market in this country for watches of other colours, at the present time. The rest will, of course, be taken back to you. , we feel that the most suitable course of action is to return to you unpaid any of the goods considered unsatisfactory, and to deduct (扣除) any cost incurred from our final settlement. We shall also, of course, be forced to reconsider whether any further orders should be placed with your pany. We look forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Miss Madonna Morrison 76. Which sentence in the passage can be replaced by the following one? We just doubt if there would be any potential chances of trading with your pany in the future. 77. Please fill in the blank in the passage with proper words or phrases. (Please answer within 10 words.) 78. Please translate the underlined sentence into Chinese. 79. Why was the watch producer told to carry out the instructions strictly with regard to colors of the watches? (Please answer within 20 words.) 80. What would you do if you received the letter as manager of the watch pany? (Please answer within 20 words.) 第二節(jié)：寫作（滿分30分） 閱讀下面的文字，用英語寫一篇120—150詞的短文。 自xx年6月1日起，在所有超市、商場、集貿(mào)市場等商品零售場所實行塑料購物袋 有償使用制度，一律不得免費提供塑料購物袋。請你結(jié)合自己的生活實際，自擬題目，談談 自己對該項規(guī)定的看法與建議。 參考答案： 第一節(jié)：閱讀表達（每小題3分，合計15分） 76. We shall also, of course, be forced to reconsider whether any further orders should be placed with your pany. 評分建議：能夠準確找出上述句子。字體清楚，無拼寫錯誤，即可得分。有部分抄寫錯誤要酌情扣分。 77. As a result of the above problems (reasons) / Because of what has been stated above 評分建議：與內(nèi)容相關(guān)，能呈上啟下，無語法、拼寫錯誤即可得分。關(guān)鍵詞：problem, reason, above. 78. 雖然我們理解偶爾出現(xiàn)的產(chǎn)品延誤難以避免，但我們必須指出，貴公司曾經(jīng)給我們承諾會及時送貨。 評分建議：忠于原句，語句通順，無語言錯誤，方可得3分。其他情況酌情扣分。注意關(guān)鍵詞while與appreciate的翻譯。 79. Because the market for watches of other colors is very limited in the country. 評分建議：在規(guī)定字數(shù)內(nèi)，準確回答“其他顏色的表市場有限”這一原因方可得分。 80. I would write a letter of apology and pay for all the loss of the receiving pany for further cooperation. 評分建議：只要與原文內(nèi)容相關(guān)，所陳述的解釋合情合理均可得分；不完整的陳述視答題情況酌情給分。 特別說明：1. 卷面涂抹（包括亂涂亂畫）嚴重，總分扣2分； 2. 異色筆、鉛筆答題，一律判0分。 Say “No” to Plastic Bags Plastic bags will not be provided free in the supermarkets, department stores and other markets since June 1 st, xx. customers need to pay for it. I’m in favor of this act. In my view, the government is starting to attach importance to protecting the environment. It also reminds people to be aware of the responsibility to protect our environment. As well all know, plastic bags make our shopping easy and convenient. However, it takes a very long time for them to break up. As a consequence, they can cause serious pollution, which does great harm to our surroundings. What’s worse, they can be mistakenly used in our daily life. Therefore, I strongly remend that every one of us should take it seriously and try more recyclable bags, like paper ones when shopping to make our environment more friendly. 第四部分：書面表達（共兩節(jié)，滿分45分） 第一節(jié)：閱讀表達（共5小題；每小題3分，滿分15分） 閱讀下面的短文，請根據(jù)短文后的要求答題（請注意問題后的字數(shù)要求）。 Young Japanese are not content with using mobile phones to text and e-mail ,play games, take photos and check the news and weather. They now have another reason to stay glued to their handset : full-length novels. There are hundreds of titles available on subscription websites .There are classic novels and new fictions ,as well as essays ,dictionaries ,educational and self-improvement tests—anything to keep Japan’s 85 million mobile phone users happy. Traditional bookworms may be shocked at the thought of reading a classic novel on a tiny screen. But devotees of the new medium say it is a habit that is easily picked up. The biggest attraction is the convenience of being able to have your favorite books with you all of the time. Miona Yamashita is a typical e-reader :young, urban ,and very fond of her mobile . And , she’s eager to find new ways to kill time when she’s on the train. “I like the idea of being able to read on crowded trains where there isn’t even space to open a book,” said the 24-year-old office worker. Improvements in display technology and features such as automatic page-flipping (you don’t to move down the screen line by line) have made reading novels easier . Publishers don’t see e-books as a threat to written books. Instead ,they see them as an opportunity to draw in a new generation of readers .Several well-known Japanese publishers are setting up subscription sites. Users pay a few hundred yen a month. They can search for books by author ,title or type .Several authors write short novels specifically for . The most popular Japanese writer ,known as Yoshi, took e-novels to a new level with “Deep Love”. It’s a story of a 17-year-old Tokyo girl who finds romance through a chance meeting. It proved so popular that it was made into a film. 76. What is the best title of the passage?(within 10 words) __________________________________________________________________________ 77. Which sentence in the passage is the closest in meaning to the following one? However ,e-novel fans hold that you can easily grow accustomed to this type of reading. __________________________________________________________________________ 78. Fill in the blank in Paragraph 7 with proper words or phrases to plete the sentence.(within 10 words) __________________________________________________________________________ 79. Do you like the idea of e-books ? Why or why not? (within 30 words) __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 80. Translate the underlined sentence in the first paragraph into Chinese. __________________________________________________________________________ 第二節(jié)：寫作（滿分30分） 閱讀下面的文字，用英語寫一篇120—150詞的短文。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。） 最近，山東省教育廳下重手整治全省中小學加班加點的現(xiàn)象。作為一名高三學生，請結(jié)合自己及身邊的實際談談你對這一舉措的認識。 Shandong Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student has to go to school on weekends or during official holidays. __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ___ 參考答案： 76. E-books :a new way to spend time/ Reading novels on your mobile phone 77. But devotees of the new medium say it is a habit that is easily picked up. 78. mobile phone reading/ mobile phone readers/ mobile phone users… 79. Yes .Because it is very convenient for readers: you can read anywhere at any time as long as you have a mobile phone with you. No. Because that makes reading less serious :you cannot concentrate enough to go very deep into the reading .Besides ,it is not good for your eyes. 80. 他們現(xiàn)在又多了粘在手機上的一個原因：整部整部的長篇小說。 One possible version: Shandong Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student has to go to school on weekends or during official holidays. For the first time in our senior middle school life my friends and I enjoyed a full-length winter vacation ,and for the first time in years we are free to do what is necessary and important to meet our personal needs .In the past years ,we kept working hard from morning till night in order to get a higher mark in the college entrance exam. We omitted everything (such as art classes ,social activities ,etc. )that did not have a direct relationship with that goal .Consequently ,many of us are weak both physically and mentally. Over 70 percent of my classmates are near-sighted … If the whole generation of us continue to live this way, what would the future of our nation be like?! I’d like to express my heartfelt thanks to our responsible government for its wise and timely decision to bring all that to an end. 第四部分：書面表達（共兩節(jié), 滿分45） 第一節(jié)：閱讀表達(共5小題, 每小題3分, 滿分15分) 閱讀下面的短文, 請根據(jù)短文后的要求答題（請注意問題后的字數(shù)要求） London has more than nine million visitors every year. They e and visit some of the most famous places in England：Big Ben, the Tower of London and the River Thames. You can see some of the most interesting places in the city by getting on one of Londons tour buses. It has an open roof and let you off at any places you want to visit. The River Thames is London’s main waterway. It has shaped the capital’s landscape, history and geography. So one of the best ways of making sense of the city is to take a trip along the river. Much of the riverbank can now be walked along, particularly the south bank. The clock tower of the Houses of Parliament, Big Ben, has bee one of the main symbols of London. It rises up nearly 100 m to a golden point above the clock and a 13-ton bell. The sound of the bell, which you can hear at the beginning of many television and radio programmes, has bee well-known throughout the nation. No visit to London is plete without a look at the Tower of London, in the eastern part of the city. After Big Ben, the Tower may be Londons most visited tourist spot. Sightseeing in London is great, but . So, the best way to start the day is to fill up on an English breakfast. For starters, have an egg, bacon, sausages, tomatoes, mushrooms, black pudding and fried bred. Then finish off with toast and jam, and a large pot of tea. You can buy an English breakfast in nearly every hotel, and at many restaurants and cafes. An English pub is a good place to stop for lunch and a drink：You can get hot or cold food and try one of Englands beers. Or you can sit outside one of the many roadside pubs and cafes in London, and simply watch the busy world go by. 76．What is the best title of the passage?（within 10 words. ) 77．Which sentence in the passage can be replaced by the following one? It is very regretful if you don’t go to the Tower of London when visiting London. 78．Pleasefill in the blank in paragraph 5 with proper expressions to plete the sentence. (within 10 words. ) 79．Which place of London do you want to visit most? Why?（within 30 words.) 80．Translate the underlined sentence in the third paragraph into Chinese. 第二節(jié)：寫作（滿分30分） 某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展關(guān)于 “是否取消黃金周”的討論。請你根據(jù)下面所給的要點提示, 用英語寫一篇短文, 描述目前存在的兩種看法, 并陳述你的觀點, 以便向該網(wǎng)站投稿。 贊成取消的人認為： 反對取消的人認為： 你的觀點 1.給交通、旅游者安全和環(huán)境帶來巨大的壓力； 2．購票難； 3．服務質(zhì)量下降 1．消費需求得到滿足； 2．促進旅游業(yè)和經(jīng)濟發(fā)展 …… 注意： 1．詞數(shù)：120~150字； 2．參考詞匯：黃金周the Golden Week（或以the GW代替） 參考答案： 第一節(jié)：閱讀表達（每小題3分, 共15分） 76．Visiting \Paying a visit to London （評分要求：依據(jù)與文章整體內(nèi)容的相關(guān)程度酌情給分, 關(guān)鍵詞visiting或者是paying a visit to） 77．No visit to London is plete without a look at the Tower of London. （評分要求：要求準確找出以上句子） 78．(it can be very)tiring＼exhausting＼you can get tired＼exhausted＼it takes strength. (評分要求：要求給出的答案能保持與上下文的連貫性而且與參考答案相近) 79．My favorite place is the River Thames. We can get further impression of the citys history, geography and culture. The landscape of the fiver is wonderful. (以此為例) 80．想了解這個城市最好的方式之一是沿河旅游。 ’、 (評分要求：要求在準確全面的基礎(chǔ)上翻譯成較為通順的漢語并表達出作者的思路) One possible version： In recent days, a discussion is being carried on about whether the Golden Week should be cancelled Some people agreed to cancel the Golden Week. They pointed out that nationwide traveling has put big pressure on transportation, tourist safety and the environment. The Golden Week results in crowded scenic spots and packed hotels, making the quality of service decline. However, other people argue the golden week has encouraged people to spend more during the seven-day holiday so it has brought huge profits to the nation’s tourism industry and promoted the economic growth. Despite the fact that voices calling for its cancellation are being even stronger I still think people need to relax and mon vacation time is very important. It should take into consideration not only ines, but also the satisfaction of those who take the holiday. Opinions of those who object： In my opinion, the current golden week might as well be canceled and we should readjust the nation’s public holidays. The new 1ist of public holidays may include important traditional festivals, such as the Dragon Boat Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival. 第四部分：書面表達（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分） 第一節(jié)：閱讀表達（共5小題；每題3分，滿分15分） When stress does occur ,it is important to recognize and deal with it .Here are some suggestions for you to handle stress. Try physical activities. When you feel nervous or upset ,release the pressure through exercise or physical activities. Walking and working in your garden are just two of the activities you can try. . You can talk to someone about your concerns and worries. Perhaps a friend or family member can help you see your problem in a different light .If you feel your problem is serious ,you can seek professional help .Knowing when to ask for help may avoid more serious problems later. Know your limits .If a problem is beyond your control and can not be changed at the moment , don’t “fight” the situation. Learn to accept what it is –for now –until the time when you can change it. Take care of yourself .Get enough rest and eat well. If you are irritable（急躁的）and tense due to lack of sleep or if you are not eating correctly ,you will have less ability to deal with stressful situations. Make time for fun. Schedule time for both work and relaxation .Play can be just as important to your well-being as work; you need a break from your daily routine to just relax and have fun. It’s Ok to cry. A good cry can be a healthy way to bring relief to your anxiety ,and it might even prevent a headache or other physical consequences. 76. What is the best title for the passage ?(Please answer within 10 words.) 77. Which sentence in the passage can be replace by the following one? If your problem is hard for you to handle ,you can turn to professionals for help. 78. Please fill in the blank in Para. 3 with proper words or phrases to plete the sentence . (Please answer within 10 words) 79. How do physical activities help you when you are nervous or upset? (Please answer within 30 words)