原九年級英語全冊 Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected（第6課時）Section B（3a3b）同步作文指導(dǎo)課件 （新版）人教新目標(biāo)版

第六課時Section B (3a3b)單元同步作文指導(dǎo)Unit 12Life is full of the unexpected.本單元以“描述過去發(fā)生的事”為話題展開學(xué)習(xí)，重點學(xué)習(xí)了語法過去完成時態(tài)。具體到書面表達(dá)中要求同學(xué)們會用一般過去時態(tài)描述或介紹過去發(fā)生的事情；但如果采用倒敘的方法時，也可以用過去完成時態(tài)。文章通常是敘述人們的親身經(jīng)歷，親眼所見或親耳所聞，使讀者得到一種親切真實的感覺。有時為了表現(xiàn)文章中心思想的需要，把最能表現(xiàn)中心思想的部分提到前面，加以突出；或是為了避免平鋪直敘，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)富于變化，還可以采用倒敘的方法。另外在敘述的最后或過程中，可以加以適當(dāng)?shù)淖h論來滲透自己的情感，表達(dá)自己的觀點或感受。教材中出現(xiàn)的相關(guān)句型：When she got to school，she realized she had_left her backpack at home.當(dāng)她到達(dá)學(xué)校時，她意識到她的書包落在家里了。By_the_time she went outside，the bus had_already_left.在她走出去時，公汽已經(jīng)走了。英文論壇上大家都在談?wù)撟约旱幕騽e人的故事。請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文，與大家分享杰克(Jack)的故事。要求：90詞左右。提示：1.一天，杰克打算去公園；2他坐公交車用了大約兩個小時才到達(dá)公園門口；3他又累又餓，去餐館買面條吃；4結(jié)賬時發(fā)現(xiàn)錢不夠；5他的朋友來送錢時，已是下午四點，公園關(guān)門了。Jack wanted to go to a park one day.The park was so far away from his home that it took him about two hours to get there by bus.When he arrived at the park he was very tired and hungry.So he went into a restaurant and bought some noodles.When he was going to pay for the noodles，he found that he hadnt taken enough money with him.So he had to call one of his friends for help.By the time his friend got to the restaurant and paid for the noodles，it had been 4：00 pm，and the park had been closed.【點撥】處運用了so.that.結(jié)果狀語從句，強(qiáng)化了其表達(dá)效果。文章中靈活運用了本單元所學(xué)的兩個重要句型，如處，達(dá)到了學(xué)以致用的效果，同時也使文章更加生動。An Unforgettable DayIll never forget June 11th，2012.It was a sunny day.On my way to school，my friend did something rude to me.It made me sad.Whats worse，I got a “C” in my favourite subject.After school，I went home unhappily.It was dark in the room.Suddenly the lights were on，and I heard the song “Happy birthday”I was surprised to see many people and a big cake.“Oh，its my birthday.” I was so excited and happy.It was my first time to have a birthday party.Ill never forget that day.One possible version：Thursday，June 3rd，2013SunnyThis morning my alarm clock didnt go off，so I overslept.By the time I woke up，it had already been late.When I got to the bus stop，a bus had just left.So I had to wait for another bus.Every day buses run every five minutes，but this morning I waited for about twenty minutes.When I got to the classroom，the second class had already begun.In the English class，I was so sleepy that I fell asleep.Unfortunately，I was noticed by my English teacher.After school，I found that I had left my keys at home.My parents were both at work at the time，so I had to wait for them until 19：00.It was a really unlucky day，wasnt it?