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高考作文，特別是基礎寫作，提供的信息點多，但句數有限，熟練掌握以下四種整合信息的方法非常重要。,合并句子我們可以用：(1)介詞短語作定語。(2)介詞短語作狀語。,(1) Waste water is making the river worse and worse. (2) The waste water is from a factory. (3) The factory lies on the river.,合并：Waste water from the factory on the river is making the river worse and worse. (定語),【課堂練習】根據括號中的提示合并每一組句子，然后將這5組句子合并成一篇5句話的短文。 1.Xiaxi Town is not big but beautiful. It has an area of about 8 square kilometers. (介詞短語) 2.There is an old tower there. The tower lies in the east of the town. There is a river behind the tower. (介詞短語位于句首的完全倒裝句；定語從句),3.The sun rising from the river was very beautiful. Yesterday we took a bus there to visit the tower. (并列句) 4.We started early. We wanted to enjoy the sunrise on the top of the tower. (介詞短語) 5.As soon as we got there，we began to take photos. (介詞短語),Xiaxi Town, with an area of about 8 square kilometers, is not big but beautiful. In the east of the town lies an old tower, behind which there is a river. The sun rising from the river was very beautiful, and we took a bus there to visit the tower yesterday. We started early for the purpose of enjoying the sunrise on the top of the tower. On arriving there, we began to take photos.,【課外作業(yè)】 用介詞短語合并每一組句子，然后將這5組句子合并成一篇5句話的短文。 1. A professor gave us a talk this morning. He came from Beijing University. He talked about how to learn English well. 2. He told us his own interesting experiences of learning English. We laughed a lot.,3. His talk lasted an hour. He asked us some questions. 4. His talk was vivid and instructive. I learned a lot from his talk. 5. I went back home. I decided to work hard at English.,A professor from Beijing University gave us a talk on how to learn English well this morning. On hearing his own interesting experiences of learning English, we laughed a lot. During the one-hour talk, he asked us some questions. I learned a lot from his vivid and instructive talk. On my way back home, I decided to work hard at English.,在寫作中，正確使用非謂語動詞，無疑為文章增色不少。非謂語動詞包括不定式 (未來)、現在分詞 (主動) 和過去分詞 (被動)。,【典型例題】用非謂語動詞將以下各組句子分別合成一句話。 1.(1) He looked up. (2) He saw a bird in the tree. 用不定式合并：He looked up to see a bird in the tree.,2.(1) I don’t like the man. (2) The man is wearing a pair of dark glasses. 用現在分詞合并：I don’t like the man wearing a pair of dark glasses.,3.(1) The temple is visited by thousands of people every year. (2) It was built 1, 000 years ago. 用過去分詞合并：The temple，built 1, 000 years ago，is visited by thousands of people every year.,【課堂練習】用非謂語動詞合并每一組句子，然后將這5組句子合并成一篇5句話的短文。 1. I’m writing to you. I want to express my sincere thanks to Good Man. 2. Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car. I was walking on the road at that time.,3. I was seriously injured. I couldn’t stand up. 4. A man saw what had happened to me. He stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital. 5. I don’t know his name. I call him Good Man.,I’m writing to you to express my sincere thanks to Good Man. Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car while walking on the road. Seriously injured，I couldn’t stand up. Luckily，a man stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital when seeing what had happened to me. Not knowing his name， I call him Good Man.,【課外作業(yè)】 用非謂語動詞合并每一組句子，然后將這5組句子合并成一篇5句話的短文。 1. On the morning of last Sunday，I went to the park. I wanted to take a walk there. 2. After one hour’s walk， I got tired and sat down on a stone by the road. I wanted to have a rest.,3. Suddenly I saw an ant. She was trying hard to move another ant who was dead. 4. She failed many times. She managed to carry him away. 5. I saw that little creatures also have sincere love as human beings. I was greatly moved.,On the morning of last Sunday，I went to the park to take a walk. After one hour’s walk， I got tired and sat down on a stone by the road to have a rest. Suddenly I saw an ant trying hard to move another ant who was dead. Having failed many times， she managed to carry him away. Seeing that little creatures also have sincere love as human beings， I was greatly moved.,在寫作中，我們運用并列連詞合并句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列連詞有and， but， or， nor， so， yet， for， as well as， both…and，not…but， not only…but (also)， either…or， neither…nor，(and) then， since等。,【典型例句】用并列連詞合并下列各組句子。 1.(1) He is a friend in word. (2) He is a friend in deed， too. 用as well as合并：He is a friend in word as well as in deed.,2.(1) I know her. (2) I am her best friend. 用not only…but also合并：Not only do I know her， but (also) I am her best friend.,【課堂練習】用并列連詞合并每一組句子，然后將這5組句子合并成一篇5句話的短文。 John wanted to settle down. His wife also wanted to settle down. 2. He got a job as a manager in New York City. He was looking for a house to live in.,3. He found a house not far from his office. The house was not far from his children’s school. 4. The house was not big. The house had a beautiful garden. 5. His wife liked their new home. His children also like their new home very much.,John, as well as his wife, wanted to settle down. He got a job as a manager in New York City and he was looking for a house to live in. He found a house neither far from his office nor far from his children’s school. The house was not big, but had a beautiful garden. Not only his wife but also his children liked their new home very much.,【課外作業(yè)】用并列連詞合并每一組句子，然后將這5組句子合并成一篇5句話的短文。 1. Today，two of my friends went fishing by bike. I also went fishing by bike. 2. We started off at 8: 00. We got to Longwang Lake at 8: 30.,3. It was a little hot. The fish didn’t seem to have a good appetite. I only got 10 fish during the day. 4. We had lunch in a little restaurant by the lake. We returned home at 5：30 p.m. 5. I was very tired.,Two of my friends and I went fishing by bike today. We started off at 8:00 and got to Longwang Lake at 8:30. I only got 10 fish during the day，for it was a little hot and the fish didn’t seem to have a good appetite. We had lunch in a little restaurant by the lake and returned home at 5:30 p.m. I was tired，but I felt happy.,要使文章漂亮，在寫作中不可能不使用主從復合句，從句有狀語從句、名詞性從句和定語從句。,【典型例句】用主從復合句合并下列各組句子。 1.(1) China is the third largest country in the world. (2) Everyone knows it. 用定語從句合并：As everyone knows， China is the third largest country in the world.,2. (1) It was raining hard. (2) We kept on working. 用狀語從句合并：Although it was raining hard， we kept on working.,【課堂練習】用主從復合句合并每一組句子，然后將這5組句子合并成一篇5句話的短文。 1. I live in a small town. It is about 20 kilometers away from the city. 2. In the past，we planted many trees here. Now，no trees can be seen except heavy smoke and dark rivers.,3. Since ten years ago， many factories have been built. Heavy smoke and waste water from the factories are let into the sky and the rivers without anything done to them. 4. Some more factories are going to be set up. People told me that. 5. The government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted. This is my opinion.,I live in a small town which is about 20 kilometers away from the city. Although we planted many trees here, no trees can be seen now except heavy smoke and dark rivers. The reason is that since ten years ago, many factories have been built, from where heavy smoke and waste water are let into the sky and the rivers without anything done to them. It is said that some more factories will be set up here. I think the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted.,【課外作業(yè)】 用主從復合句合并每一組句子，然后將這5組句子合并成一篇5句話的短文。 1. The drought is likely to continue till May and no substantial rainfall is expected ahead of the rainy season. The drought started from last autumn. 2. It has left 18 million residents and 11.7 million heads of livestock in the region with water shortages and caused direct economic loss of 23.7 billion yuan. Experts estimate.,3. The government would organize more than 1，100 engineers and workers from across the country to dig wells in the country’s southwest. It is reported. 4. More than 1, 600 wells will be drilled. They will provide 200, 000 cubic meters of drinking water per day for 2 million people and 1 million heads of livestock. 5. 1, 400 of the wells are expected to finish digging by May 10. One of the engineers told me.,The drought，which started from last autumn，is likely to continue till May and no substantial rainfall is expected ahead of the rainy season. Experts estimate that it has left 18 million residents and 11.7 million heads of livestock in the region with water shortages and caused direct economic loss of 23.7 billion yuan.,It is reported that the government would organize more than 1, 100 engineers and workers from across the country to dig wells in the country’s southwest. More than 1, 600 wells will be drilled，which will provide 200, 000 cubic meters of drinking water per day for 2 million people and 1 million heads of livestock. One of the engineers told me that 1, 400 of the wells are expected to be finished digging by May 10.,