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1、It was a peaceful night. I was sleeping with my brothers, feeling warm and comfortable.
Mama was sleeping nearby, covered by snow. Papa was somewhere nearby, watching over us.
There was a bright moon and we had all had a good meal of venison (鹿肉)Papa had caught
earlier.
“Uncle Louis is coming”,P
2、apa said. We loved Uncle Louis. He was a funny wolf, and
always had interesting things to tell us and show us.
A little while later, Uncle Louis appeared. We did not —roach him with respect the way
we approached Papa. We flew at him, jumped all over him, and rolled him in the snow. Uncle
Louis l
3、aughed and patted us with his paws. He is black all over, with yellow eyes, and he is very
tall.
“It's the longest night of the year”,Uncle Louis said, "Does everyone feel like taking a run
through the woods? I want to show you something unusual?"
Hearing that, Papa warned that it was dangerous
4、to go near that pack of humans who lived
in the woods.
“They are hardly dangerous'^ Uncle Louis laughed, “They are so clumsy and make so
much noise. They are not able to get near us or even see us if we don't want them to.
Besides, this is their special night. They are quite peaceful and won't b
5、e bothering about
wolves.”
"Oh, please, Papa, let us run through the woods with Uncle Louis and see something
unusual! ” We all begged.
“It is a fine night”,Papa smiled, T must admit, I do feel like running.”
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And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods.
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We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans
place.
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It was a peaceful night.
a bright moon
He was a funny wolf, and always had interesting things to tell us and show us
I wan
7、t to show you something unusual.
Papa warned that it was dangerous to go near that pack of humans who lived in the woods
this is their special night
They are quite peaceful
see something unusual!
One possible version:
And we were off, all of us9 heading towards the woods. It was almost midnigh
8、t. The snow
felt crispy and crunchy under our feet. The moon shone silver on my brother's fur, and the stars
were as bright as diamonds. As we dashed through the woods, we breathed the cold air deep
into our lungs, feeling refreshed. With Papa and Uncle Louis leading the way, I felt strong and
l
9、ight as though I could run forever. Then we smelled something nice.
We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the human's place. It was the first
time my brothers and I had ever approached those wooden things, which, according to Uncle
Louis, were made by putting pieces of wood together.
10、We didn't see any humans, but we could
hear them together inside the wooden things with warm light shining out through the holes. It
was peaceful. I thought, “Even if they are dangerous, they are animals, just like we are.” Then
we threw back out heads and sitting on the hillside above the place where the humans live, we
wolves sang, too, on this unusual night.