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1、佳作賞析佳作賞析議論文議論文現(xiàn)象說明類現(xiàn)象說明類 (2011蘇州高三聯(lián)合調研)假如你是班長，看到班上有部分同學在完成作業(yè)時，不是獨立完成而是經常抄襲他人的作業(yè)。針對這種現(xiàn)象，你班召開班會課進行討論，請你以“My opinion on copying others homework”為題，在班會課上談談你自己的看法。上一頁上一頁主要原因1.作業(yè)量大，偏難；2.懶惰，對功課不感興趣；3.取悅老師和家長。你的看法1.抄襲作業(yè)不誠實，違反校紀，對自己不負責任；2.勤奮學習，有困難請教同學和老師；3.自擬(至少1點)。上一頁上一頁注意： 1.必須包括所有內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮。2詞數(shù)：150左右。標題與開
2、頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。My opinion on copying others homeworkToday we are going to have a discussion about copying others homework.Here Ill say something about it first._1話題特點：這篇書面表達為議論文中的現(xiàn)象說明類，試題中給出了一些信息，但不詳細，寫作時需要自己補充一定的內容。根據現(xiàn)象說明類議論文的特點我們需要從已給出的信息中找出自己認為最重要的因素并加以闡述。2寫好這類文章，需要注意：(1)現(xiàn)象說明類議論文的特點。強調語言表達的客觀性，力求簡
3、潔；圍繞主題闡述；多用書面語，少用口頭語。(2)詳略得當。本文重點應寫你認為其中最重要的一個因素，并說明原因。(3)適當?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié)以使文章顯得豐滿，充實恰當?shù)厥褂眠B詞及過渡語使文章行文流暢，自然得體。上一頁上一頁3現(xiàn)象說明類議論文的寫作模式可以歸納為： (1)陳述所給信息中所提出的某一現(xiàn)象。 (2)闡述不同的因素與這一現(xiàn)象的關系。(3)陳述其中一個因素與這一現(xiàn)象的密切聯(lián)系并說明理由。(4)總結并提出建議。4常用的句式表達：(1)開頭：As we all know, .Recently .It is known to us all that .is being discussed hotly a
4、mong .上一頁上一頁(2)說明與這一現(xiàn)象有關的各個因素：There are many factors that lead to .This is caused by many factors, and among them, the most important are .We can see that .are closely related to the phenomenon.(3)表達個人觀點并說明理由：While among all the elements，I personally think that.becauseIn my opinion，.(4)總結全文：From the
5、 above，we should.So we should. My opinion on copying others homeworkToday we are going to have a discussion about copying others homework.Here Ill say something about it first.We all know some of our classmates copy others homework instead of doing it independently/on their own/by themselves.On the
6、one hand，they do so because they have too much homework to do at home and at school，some of which is beyond them/too difficult for them.On the other hand，some of the students are so lazy that they are not intersted in their lessons at all.They dont work hard and have to copy others homework just to
7、finish the assignments and please their teachers and parents.上一頁上一頁In my opinion，its dishonest of them to copy others homework，which is against the school rules.Whats more，copying others homework means cheating themselves.As middle school students，we should be honest，put our heart into our studies a
8、nd finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying.When we have any difficulties/problems with our homework，we can turn to our teachers and classmates for help.Only in this way can we make progress and take reponsibility for our future.文章開篇便點出了本文要說明的現(xiàn)象“抄襲他人作業(yè)”，接下來說明產生這一現(xiàn)象的原因。“instead of doing
9、 it by themselves”，“on the other hand” 以及“so that”等句式的正確運用為文章增添了亮點。最后一段中作者表達了自己對這一現(xiàn)象的看法，并提出了合理的建議，不僅對上文的現(xiàn)象進行了充實，而且將文章的內容進一步升華，使全文一氣呵成，渾然一體。(1) 短語類：have a disussion about.，instead of，on their own，be interested in，have difficulties/problems with.，turn to sb.for help，make progress上一頁上一頁(2) 句子類：狀語從句：The
10、y do so because.Some of the students are so lazy that.When we have any.，we can turn to.定語從句：.，which is against the school rule.倒裝句：Only in this way can we make progress.其他句式：They dont work hard and have to copy.just to finish the.As middle school students，we should.(3) 過渡語：in my opinion，on the one h
11、and.on the other hand習作過關據一項調查顯示，有據一項調查顯示，有85.8%85.8%的中學生說自己的字跡的中學生說自己的字跡不好看，而他們又不想改善字跡，其理由有很大差不好看，而他們又不想改善字跡，其理由有很大差別。請根據下圖寫一篇別。請根據下圖寫一篇120120個詞左右的短文，說明該個詞左右的短文，說明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法，開頭已給出。現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法，開頭已給出。上一頁上一頁上一頁上一頁_【參考范文】 Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their
12、parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor.Yet for various reasons, many students dont want to improve their handwriting.51.5 percent of the students think that they can jus
13、t use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise.10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.上一頁上一頁As the saying goes, writing style shows the man.Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students.Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.
高考英語 考點突破Unit5 階段寫作方略課件 大綱人教版選修7
