天津市高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 第五部分 書(shū)面表達(dá) 專(zhuān)題二十六 圖畫(huà)類(lèi)課件
專(zhuān)題二十六圖畫(huà)類(lèi)專(zhuān)題二十六圖畫(huà)類(lèi)-2-考情概覽圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作考查考生的觀(guān)察能力和語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。除了圖畫(huà)之外,它所提供的漢語(yǔ)提示很少或幾乎沒(méi)有,留給考生的發(fā)揮空間很大,具有形象、直觀(guān)、內(nèi)容具體化等特點(diǎn)。此類(lèi)寫(xiě)作題既能充分考查考生的想象、觀(guān)察、推理、判斷以及語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力,又在一定程度上要求考生學(xué)會(huì)說(shuō)明某個(gè)道理或得出某個(gè)結(jié)論。從近幾年高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)題材來(lái)看,圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容多為學(xué)生所熟悉的話(huà)題,或者是社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題,具有鮮明的時(shí)代感和教育性。從考查的體裁來(lái)看,圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的體裁涉及記敘文、說(shuō)明文和議論文,主要分為敘事類(lèi)和說(shuō)理類(lèi)。-3-一、圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的技巧圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作一般具有敘事性,或者具有說(shuō)理性。對(duì)于敘事性圖畫(huà)作文,考生則要弄清故事的背景,注意時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物以及事件的三要素(起因、經(jīng)過(guò)、結(jié)果),并在寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié),增加一些必要的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ),使故事的敘述更加流暢;對(duì)于說(shuō)理性的圖畫(huà)作文,考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要對(duì)圖畫(huà)的寓意展開(kāi)闡述,首先要描述圖畫(huà)傳遞的信息,揭示圖畫(huà)的主題,然后圍繞這個(gè)主題,闡明自己的看法和觀(guān)點(diǎn)。1.認(rèn)真審圖,挖掘細(xì)節(jié)圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作沒(méi)有詳細(xì)的漢語(yǔ)提示,所有的寫(xiě)作信息都來(lái)源于所提供的圖畫(huà),因此考生寫(xiě)作前一定要先仔細(xì)觀(guān)察圖畫(huà),注意圖畫(huà)中的細(xì)節(jié),挖掘出寫(xiě)作所需要的信息。-4-2.把握主旨,謀篇布局通過(guò)觀(guān)察圖畫(huà),確定文章體裁,根據(jù)體裁明確寫(xiě)作形式,并確定寫(xiě)作應(yīng)用的人稱(chēng),若以日記、回憶錄等形式來(lái)寫(xiě),則要用第一人稱(chēng);若以講故事的形式來(lái)寫(xiě),一般采用第三人稱(chēng)。在確定體裁的基礎(chǔ)上也要確定所使用的時(shí)態(tài)。體裁確定了,就需要明確文章的主旨,并將觀(guān)察所得到的有效信息加以整合,安排好寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容和順序。圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作一般由三個(gè)段落組成,首段總體概括圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容,為下一段詳細(xì)描述其內(nèi)容作鋪墊;第二段是文章的主體部分,詳細(xì)而有條理地描述圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容,然后進(jìn)行深入的分析;最后一段則簡(jiǎn)要地抒發(fā)自己的一些感想或進(jìn)行總結(jié)性的評(píng)論,說(shuō)明自己所得出的結(jié)論或感想。-5-3.注意聯(lián)系,合理想象圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作之所以??疾凰?就是因?yàn)檫@種呈現(xiàn)話(huà)題的方式非常獨(dú)特,圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容通俗易懂,簡(jiǎn)單明了,但有一些隱含的內(nèi)容在圖畫(huà)中沒(méi)有直接顯示出來(lái),需要考生通過(guò)合理的想象,挖掘出圖畫(huà)的弦外之音。因此,在構(gòu)思寫(xiě)作時(shí),我們要注意在對(duì)圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述的基礎(chǔ)上,合理地發(fā)揮想象,把那些圖畫(huà)中沒(méi)有直接顯示出來(lái)的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),使寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容更豐富,更具有思想性。4.發(fā)表議論,升華主題圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作絕不能停留在對(duì)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容的單純的描述上,在描述完圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容后,考生要通過(guò)議論來(lái)升華主題,以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。同時(shí),我們應(yīng)注意,最后的議論內(nèi)容要與圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容密切相關(guān),切記不能脫離主題。-6-5.參考模板,用標(biāo)志詞圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作也有一定的常用句式或模板可以參考,例如:It can be seen from the picture that.The picture tells us that.According to the picture,.In conclusion,.As can be seen from the picture(s),.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.As far as Im concerned,I firmly support the view that.當(dāng)然,針對(duì)故事性強(qiáng)的圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作,如果是按照時(shí)間順序來(lái)敘述某一事件,則可以考慮使用at first,then,later,after that,finally等標(biāo)志性詞匯,以使思路更加清晰,表達(dá)更加富有層次感。-7-二、圖畫(huà)類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的常見(jiàn)形式(一)看圖敘事類(lèi)1.基本結(jié)構(gòu)看圖敘事類(lèi)通常為三段式作文,第一段描述圖畫(huà)的大致情況,第二段解釋分析圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容,第三段給出自己的看法以及解決問(wèn)題的辦法。-8-2.語(yǔ)句模板(1)用于描述圖畫(huà)As is described in the picture,.From the picture we can see that.The sight reminds me of something in my daily life.(2)用于記敘事件經(jīng)過(guò)At first.then.five minutes later.finally/in the end/at last.Upon arrival,we began to.Some are swimming in the lake;some are flying kites;others are playing games.was/were doing.when suddenly sb./sth.did.-9-(3)用于總結(jié)全文的句式If such measures were not taken,the problem of.would have been more serious.Unless there is a common realization of.,it is very likely that.We can conclude from this picture that.-10-3.寫(xiě)作模板The story took place時(shí)間和地點(diǎn).事件起因(要點(diǎn)一,圖片一的內(nèi)容),事件發(fā)展(要點(diǎn)二、三,圖片二、三的內(nèi)容),事件結(jié)局(最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn),最后一張圖片的內(nèi)容).From the story,I feel自己的看法或感想.-11-4.滿(mǎn)分范文(2017北京卷)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫(xiě)一篇英文周記,記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母?!睘橹黝}的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過(guò)程。注意:詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞:視頻video-12-13-范文:Graduation finally came.My classmates and I decided to do something.After a heated discussion,we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week,during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.The editing part after that was tough.We debated over what to put into the video.Some compromises were unavoidable,but the video turned out perfect.Several days later,when the video was played on the graduation ceremony,it was well received.The students and teachers shared a great time.That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.-14-(二)看圖說(shuō)理類(lèi)1.基本結(jié)構(gòu)看圖說(shuō)理類(lèi)通常為三段式作文,第一段描述圖畫(huà)的大致情況,第二段對(duì)圖畫(huà)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)年U釋說(shuō)明和分析,第三段給出自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)等。2.語(yǔ)句模板(1)引出話(huà)題的句式The purpose of the picture is to show us that.As is shown in the picture,we can see clearly the relationship between.The picture indicates/conveys the meaning that.-15-(2)用于分析現(xiàn)象的句式More and more people have come to realize the importance of.Anyone with the least common sense knows that.There are many discussions today about whether.Thanks to the advances in science and technology,our life has become more comfortable and easier.(3)用于發(fā)表議論或得出論點(diǎn)的句式As has been stated above,we must attach more importance to.In my view/In my point of view/As for me,we should take some measures as follows to deal with .And then we have to/must .Only in these ways can we solve the problem of .In conclusion,.-16-3.寫(xiě)作模板Great changes have taken place in 地點(diǎn) since時(shí)間.In the past,描述過(guò)去的情景(圖片一的內(nèi)容).But now our village/school/city is taking on a new look.描述現(xiàn)在的情景(圖片二的內(nèi)容).There are many reasons for the great changes.First,變化的第一個(gè)理由.Second,變化的第二個(gè)理由.Third,變化的第三個(gè)理由.Last but not least,變化的最后一個(gè)理由.I think自己的感想.-17-4.滿(mǎn)分范文(2015福建卷)請(qǐng)閱讀下面圖畫(huà),按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)為120左右的短文。內(nèi)容要求:1.描述畫(huà)面;2.概述其含義;3.談?wù)剛€(gè)人感想。注意:1.短文開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;3.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。參考詞匯:鑿,鉆 bore-18-In the picture, _-19-范文:In the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy,being poor,couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbors house to read at night.The moral of the story is:spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course,things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.-20-A AB B假定你是晨光中學(xué)的高二年級(jí)學(xué)生李津。以下四幅圖描述的是你參加學(xué)校“社團(tuán)招新”活動(dòng)的整個(gè)過(guò)程。請(qǐng)根據(jù)其先后順序,為??⒄Z(yǔ)園地寫(xiě)一篇短文,簡(jiǎn)要描述內(nèi)容、記述整個(gè)過(guò)程并表達(dá)你的感受。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于100;2.請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校名稱(chēng);3.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;4.開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。-21-A AB BThe new term began and the school clubs were looking for new members._-22-A AB B范文范文:The new term began and the school clubs were looking for new members.Last week,we were attracted by a poster,saying all the clubs would gather on the sports field during the lunch break on Friday and we could join the club we like.Everyone was excited about it.After lunch on Friday,we crowded onto the sports field.I was amazed at the number and variety of the clubs:the Cartoon Club,the Guitar Club,the Basketball Club and so on.It was not easy to make a choice.But I decided to join the Basketball Club,because I love sports.I signed up and so did some other students who shared my interest.In the end,we took a picture together,smiling and happy as if we had been friends for a long time.-23-A AB BI believe my school life will be more interesting because of basketball and new friends.-24-A AB B假設(shè)你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部正在舉辦征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面這幅描述小男孩和奶奶的圖畫(huà)寫(xiě)一篇短文。 內(nèi)容要求:1.描述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容,如情景、人物、動(dòng)作(奶奶正在做家務(wù)活)等;2.結(jié)合自身實(shí)際,談?wù)勀愕母邢?3.舉例說(shuō)明你能在尊老愛(ài)老方面做些什么。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于100。2.參考詞匯:按摩massage n.&v.-25-A AB B范文范文:Respecting the old is a good virtue.As is shown in the picture,a grandson might have realized that his grandma is tired from doing housework,and he thinks that he should do something about it.So he gives his grandma a gentle back massage,hoping that it can reduce his grandmas tiredness.This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education.But,totally absorbed in my own study,I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do anything to make them feel comfortable.-26-A AB BNow I know I can help them with everyday cleaning,or at least clean my own bedroom.Meanwhile,I will do my best to work hard at my lesson,for I know my progress is the best reward for their love.