海南省三亞市高考英語writing how to write a letter課件

Auld Lang Syne Should auld acquaintance be forgot. And never brought to mind? Should auld acquaintance be forgot And days olang syne? *For auld lang syne, my friends, For auld lang syne, Well taka cup okindness yet For auld lang syne. Repeat(重復重復) How to write an English letter? Do you like making friends? If yes, what will you do when you meet someone for the first time? What will you say the first time you meet new friends?How to describe yourself?Task 1: Use one or two words to describe yourself: I am_ and_.confidentgood-lookingenergetichumorouscreativereliabletall with glassespatienthonesteasygoinghandsome Task 1: Use one or two sentences to describe yourself:How to describe yourself?I am a/an _ boy/girl.I am fond of _.I have a gift for_.I am able to _.18- year-oldEnglishmusicspeak fluent English1. IN WHAT SITUATION(情境情境) WILL YOU INTRODUCE YOURSELF ?Task 2: Speaking & discussion高考真題高考真題假如你是李華，在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上看到美國中學生假如你是李華，在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上看到美國中學生Tony希望結識一位中國朋友的信息，請你希望結識一位中國朋友的信息，請你用英文給他發(fā)一份電子郵件，希望和他做用英文給他發(fā)一份電子郵件，希望和他做網(wǎng)友，并盼望能盡快收到他的回信。內(nèi)容網(wǎng)友，并盼望能盡快收到他的回信。內(nèi)容包括：包括：1. 表示愿意和對方交朋友；表示愿意和對方交朋友；2. 簡單介紹自己，如性格特征、愛好特長等；簡單介紹自己，如性格特征、愛好特長等；3. 希望多了解美國文化。希望多了解美國文化。1. IN WHAT SITUATION(情境情境) WILL YOU INTRODUCE YOURSELF ?2. IN AN ENGLISH LETTER, HOW TO INTRODUCE YOURSELF?Task 2: Speaking & discussionTASK 3: READING & DISCUSSIONPlease answer the following questions. 1. Whom does LiHua write to?2. Why does he write this letter?3. What is the main idea of each paragraph?Dear Tony, I am LiHua, a boy of 16 from China. I am glad to read your information on the Internet and I know you want to make an e-pal with a Chinese. I want to be your friend and wish to know more about the culture of the USA. I am a sociable and supportive person who likes talking with people and helping with their problems. Im good at English and I think we can communicate with each other by sending e-mails or chatting on the Internet. I like table tennis, enjoy singing and I am crazy about popular music. At the same time, I like traveling around in my spare time. I hope you can come to visit China, and Ill show you around many places of interest.I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua-對象對象署名署名-Questions: Whom does LiHua write to?Why does he write this letter?What is the main idea of each paragraph?Dear Tony, I am LiHua, a boy of 16 from China. I am glad to read your information on the Internet and I know you want to make an e-pal with a Chinese. I want to be your friend and wish to know more about the culture of the USA. I am a sociable and supportive person who likes talking with people and helping with their problems. Im good at English and I think we can communicate with each other by sending e-mails or chatting on the Internet. I like table tennis, enjoy singing and I am crazy about popular music. At the same time, I like traveling around in my spare time. I hope you can come to visit China, and Ill show you around many places of interest.I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li HuaPara 2: My hobbies & abilitiesPara 3: My wishPara 1: Self-introduction &My purpose-對象對象署名署名-影響高考英語書面表達得分的幾影響高考英語書面表達得分的幾個因素個因素1. 1.語篇信息是否完整語篇信息是否完整2. 2.行文是否連貫流暢，語言是否得體。行文是否連貫流暢，語言是否得體。3. 3.是否使用高級詞匯是否使用高級詞匯4. 4.是否使用復雜句是否使用復雜句5 .5 .卷面整潔卷面整潔, ,書寫工整書寫工整Task 4: Discuss how to write an English letter well.The Writing Steps: (審題的步驟審題的步驟)文體文體 type of writing主體時態(tài)主體時態(tài) tense人稱人稱 person信息點整合信息點整合 key points不一定要打草稿，但至少應有提不一定要打草稿，但至少應有提綱綱 Dont have to make a draft, but at least have an outline.Task 4: Discuss how to write an English letter well.英文書信篇章結構英文書信篇章結構對象：對象： Dear,開頭：開頭：主體：主體：結尾：結尾：署名：署名： Yours, Li HuaTask 4: Discuss how to write an English letter well.Dear _ (對象對象),Para 1: Beginning：-The purpose of writing the letter-點題點題,一兩個句子一兩個句子,概括性；概括性；Para 2: Body -中心記述部分；主次分明中心記述部分；主次分明-self-introduction-other key pointsPara 3: Ending: Your thanks and your wish小結；小結；呼應主題呼應主題 Yours （署名）（署名）黃金模板黃金模板英文書信篇章結構英文書信篇章結構對象：對象： Dear,開頭：開頭：主體：主體：結尾：結尾：署名：署名： Yours, Li Hua 簡要自我介紹，寫信背景和目的簡要自我介紹，寫信背景和目的 文章的要點或者題目的要求文章的要點或者題目的要求 表達期望或表示感謝表達期望或表示感謝 Task 4: Discuss how to write an English letter well.Dear _ (對象對象),Para 1: Beginning: -The purpose of writing the letter-點題點題,一兩個句子一兩個句子,概括性；概括性；Para 2: Body :-中心記述部分；主次分明中心記述部分；主次分明-self-introduction (personality & hobbies)-other key pointsPara 3: Ending: Your thanks and your wish小結；呼應主題小結；呼應主題 Yours （署名）（署名）I hope that you canI would appreciate it if you couldLooking forward to your reply.I, LiHua, am a middle school student from China. Im writing to 黃金模板黃金模板I am easy to get along with and like to make friends.I can speak fluent English.I want to / Please let me knowFinish the composition with the help of the writing advice above.TASK 5: WRITE A LETTER (A LETTER OF APPLICATION)小試牛刀小試牛刀：(高考真題鏈接高考真題鏈接) (2012 課標全國卷課標全國卷)假定你是李華，從假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個國際中學生組織將互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請申請參加。內(nèi)容主要包括：參加。內(nèi)容主要包括：1自我介紹自我介紹(包括英語能力包括英語能力)；2參加意圖參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國介紹中國、了解其他國家家)；3希望獲準。希望獲準。 You have 13 minutes to write. 0 90138 7 6 5 4 3 2 151204 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 90128 7 6 5 4 3 2 151104 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 90118 7 6 5 4 3 2 151004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 90108 7 6 5 4 3 2 15904 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 90 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 158004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 9018 7 6 5 4 3 2 157004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 9018 7 6 5 4 3 2 156004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00 MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 9018 7 6 5 4 3 2 155004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00 MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 9018 7 6 5 4 3 2 154004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00 MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 9018 7 6 5 4 3 2 153004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00 MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 9018 7 6 5 4 3 2 152004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00 MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 9018 7 6 5 4 3 2 151004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00 MinutesSecondsYou have You have 0 9018 7 6 5 4 3 2 150004 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 03 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 02 1 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 00 MinutesSecondsYou have You have Dear Sir or Madam，Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. Whats more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. Besides, Im easy to get along with and I like to make friends. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! YoursLi HuaPOST-WRITING： 【自評自評】 ：1. 要點是否齊全；要點是否齊全；2. 時態(tài)、語態(tài)是時態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確否正確 ； 3. 主謂是否一致主謂是否一致（尤其是第三人（尤其是第三人稱單數(shù)的動詞形稱單數(shù)的動詞形式式)； 4. 標點及大小寫標點及大小寫是否正確。是否正確。【互評互評】：1結構是否合理？要點是結構是否合理？要點是否齊全？否齊全？2是否有精彩詞句是否有精彩詞句?(如有如有,請用波浪線劃出）請用波浪線劃出）3是否有中式英文？是否是否有中式英文？是否有可改善的字、詞、句有可改善的字、詞、句?(如有，如時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主如有，如時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、行文邏輯、詞謂一致、行文邏輯、詞性等，請用直線劃出性等，請用直線劃出.） 4卷面是否整潔？字跡卷面是否整潔？字跡是否工整？是否工整？Pay attention to the structure and details when writing an English letter. I hope that you canI would appreciate it if you couldLooking forward to your reply.I, LiHua, am a middle school student from China. Im writing to 黃金模板黃金模板I am easy to get along with and like to make friends.I can speak fluent English.I want to / Please let me knowHOMEWORK1. 整理完善學案，反思本節(jié)課的收整理完善學案，反思本節(jié)課的收獲與不足；獲與不足；2. 潤色自己的作文，總結和掌握英潤色自己的作文，總結和掌握英文書信的寫作步驟和技巧。文書信的寫作步驟和技巧。