高中英語(yǔ) Book6 Unit3 Writing a letter課件

Writing a letterWriting a letterIf your friend start smoking and ask you to smoke together ,what should you do? What did you see?do harm to Cause illness/disease/accidenta bad habit /waste money Advise her/him to stop smoking/keep friendshipCan you talk about the harm of smoking?Dear,Dear,Can you help me please? My best friend Can you help me please? My best friend has just started smoking. I do not like it and has just started smoking. I do not like it and I told her what I thought. She laughed at I told her what I thought. She laughed at me and said that I was not grown-up me and said that I was not grown-up enough.enough.Then she offered me a cigarette and I felt Then she offered me a cigarette and I felt so embarrassed and awkward. I did not so embarrassed and awkward. I did not know how to refuse it. Please help me. I do know how to refuse it. Please help me. I do not want to start smoking, but I do not want not want to start smoking, but I do not want to lose my best friend, either.to lose my best friend, either.Yours sincerelyYours sincerelyLi xiaoleiLi xiaolei 審題 what must we pay attention to when writing the letter?思考的問(wèn)題分析Person(第幾人稱(chēng))Writing style(文章體裁)Writing topic(文章主題)Writing order(文章順序)Writing tense(文章時(shí)態(tài))the second person （第二人稱(chēng)）Letter of suggestion （建議信）No smoking/keep friendship（The logical order（邏輯順序）The present tense (一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）No smokingdo harm to Cause illness/disease/accidenta bad habit /waste money Keep friendshipgood friends/ advise her keep/break friendship stop smokingWhatever she choosesList key points does harm tocauses diseasesIs a bad habitPolish your sentencesSentence patternAdj./advMake sentencesSmokingPeopleSmokingSmokingSmoking wastes moneySmoking causes accidentsit” can be used as subjectAttributive clausesmoking is a bad habit, does harm to peoples health causing a lot of diseases, for example, lung cancer. ,it wastes much money. , careless smokers may cause dangerous fires, smoking is harmful.form a passageLink word.whichBesidessoMeanwhilewhichmeanwhilebesidesso熟悉結(jié)構(gòu)巧用模板最終成文The structure of this letterHeading(開(kāi)頭）-Body（ 主體）-Ending(結(jié)尾）-Express your understanding and analysis of the problemConvincing reasons or evidenceGive your best wishesAnalysis of problem(分析問(wèn)題）Dear Xiao lei,I am sorry you have found yourself in such a difficult situation. first, there is no need for you to feel embarrassed and awkward. she may think that she is behaving in a grownup way. Here is some advice that I think you might give her. As we all know, smoking is a bad habit, which does harm to peoples health causing a lot of diseases, for example lung cancer. Meanwhile , it waste much money. Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires, so smoking is harmful. headingbodyBeginning sentences對(duì)對(duì)方理解/樂(lè)意幫忙Prepare to give adviceSecond, talk to your friend gently and explain that you are still good friends and dont want to break this friendship . However, I will not begin smoking to suit her. give her the information above and then explain that whatever she chooses to do you will remain her friend.Dont be disappointed, Xiao leiGood luck and best wishes,LucyendingEnding sentences(祝愿）bodyHow to write the letterstepsread the requirements carefully and analyze itlist the key pointsmake sentences and polish itform a passage through passage patternstep1step2step3step4表對(duì)對(duì)方的情況表示理解，表對(duì)對(duì)方的情況表示理解，并樂(lè)意幫忙：并樂(lè)意幫忙：Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to Im very glad to and give you some suggestions on how toIt is my pleasure to doIt is a pity thatI am sorry that提建議的句式提建議的句式Y(jié)ou can doIt is useful / helpful / important / necessaryfor you to doIn my opinion, it would be better if you doIt should be a good idea for you to doIt will certainly help a lot to do sth. It also helps to do sth.It does harm to sb. / sth. = It is harmful tobenefits = be beneficial to = do good toThe following is my view/opinions Here is some advice that.表意見(jiàn)并列的連詞表意見(jiàn)并列的連詞Firstly, Above all, First of all,Besides,In addition,Moreover,In general,Personally,In my opinion, With good wishGood luck and best wishes結(jié)束語(yǔ)結(jié)束語(yǔ)假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)來(lái)信向你咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)回信。你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)回信。要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)： 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； 看中文書(shū)刊、電視；看中文書(shū)刊、電視； 學(xué)唱中文歌曲；學(xué)唱中文歌曲； 交中國(guó)朋友。交中國(guó)朋友。注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出。注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出。Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Li HuaDear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出引出主題主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建議的句式提出建議)Im looking forward to (表達(dá)表達(dá)愿望愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaDear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.I am looking forward to your letter.Sincerely yours,Li Hua