（江蘇專用）2019高考英語二輪增分策略 專題五 書面表達 第二節(jié) 分類突破 七 圖表類作文課件.ppt

七、圖表類作文,專題五第二節(jié)分類突破,考題研析,解題必備,內容索引,隨堂限時練,考題研析,典例,滿分作文,閱卷老師點評,典例 請根據你對以下兩幅圖的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”為題，用英語寫一篇作文。,參考詞匯：banner橫幅；stump樹樁 你的作文應包括以下內容： 1.簡要描述兩幅圖的內容； 2.概述你對兩幅圖中不同做法的理解； 3.舉例說明兩幅圖對你的啟示。 注意： 1.可參照圖片適當發(fā)揮； 2.作文詞數150 左右； 3.作文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。,Actions Speak Louder than Words _ _ _ _,滿分作文 Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1，a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps，but in vain， while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. The message conveyed here is clear：“Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter.Immediate actions should be taken like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment.,Actions are important in other fields，too.Instead of shouting empty slogans，it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules，stopping at the red light rather than plaining about the traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to acplish.,閱卷老師點評 本文內容充實、語言規(guī)范、句子連貫、用詞貼切。段落層次分明。第一段：描述兩幅圖的內容；第二段：概述對兩幅圖中不同做法的理解；第三段：發(fā)表啟示：舉例說明圖畫給的啟示。 1.過渡自然 本篇習作中使用的過渡詞不多，但是整個段落安排井然有序。People celebrate Earth Day differently.；The message conveyed here is clear.；Actions are important in other fields，too.使得作者娓娓道來。,2.高級詞匯和豐富句式的使用 習作中使用了高級詞匯如put up a banner，suffer severe damage，take practical measures，better the environment，donate books，follow traffic rules；高級句式如Only引導的倒裝句：Only when we.can we.。,解題必備,圖表式書面表達包括圖畫和圖表式兩類，主要是以圖畫(圖表)為載體，附帶少量文字提示或說明，要求考生從觀察入手，通過對圖畫(圖表)所含的信息的理解，發(fā)揮想象力，按照一定的順序把圖畫(圖表)的內容準確、生動地表述出來。這就要求考生需要具有一定的觀察能力、推理能力和語言組織能力。其寫作技巧有：,1.讀圖。在讀圖時務必關注四個方面： (1)題目。漫畫的標題是漫畫的眼睛，透過這個“眼睛”，可以洞察整幅漫畫的主題。 (2)畫面。漫畫畫面上的每一個細節(jié)都對表達漫畫的寓意有提示作用。 (3)語言。漫畫為了表達其寓意，常常配有言簡意賅、畫龍點睛的語言文字，思考這些語言文字中所隱含的作者的觀點。 (4)夸張。漫畫為了說明某種觀點，常常對人物行為或場景進行夸張描繪，以引起讀者共鳴?？鋸堉幫锹嫷南彝庵簦锹嬎磉_的寓意所在。,2.解意。在理解和闡釋漫畫含義時要關注三點： (1)確定作者的基本態(tài)度，是屬于夸張褒揚還是批評諷喻； (2)運用想象力，合理地把漫畫所描述的現象和實際生活相聯系； (3)要特別注意除圖片外的文字提示部分，它往往暗示了行文的方向和重點，必須仔細閱讀。,3.謀篇。英語漫畫類作文在行文時往往分為三個部分： (1)describe the picture(2) interpret the picture(3) give your opinions 這樣的結構可以使文章邏輯清晰，脈絡分明。同時，這三個部分都有一些套語可以使用，熟記這些套語可以幫助學生明顯提高文章的檔次。如： (1)讀圖描寫句式 The picture is talking about/shows. The picture shows a mon phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture，there are/is. The picture above is about. Lets look at the picture above/first.,(2)解圖描寫句式 It seems very ridiculous that.However，this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows that.It is the exact reflection of. The picture indicates that we.Nowadays，it is a mon phenomenon that. This is a satirical(諷刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of mon phenomenon among.,(3)個人觀點描寫句式 I think/believe that. As far as Im concerned，. In my opinion，. From my point of view，.,隨堂限時練,(2018揚州高三期末) You dont have to look far to find concerns about how technology will steal our jobs.Its been widely noticed that automation(自動化) is making machines more powerful and shortening the list of current jobs,that only a human can do.Martin Fords new book，Rise of the Robots，looks at how far machines have e.,At the same time，some people are getting more optimistic about the outlook(前景) of having a robot at home to help share the burden.When it es to doing housework，most of Americans would like to do it better while someone else just did it for them. 寫作內容 1.用約30個單詞概述以上圖文信息的主要內容； 2.用約120個單詞闡述你對機器人進入人類生活的看法，并用23個理由或論據支撐你的看法。,參考范文2,寫作要求 1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句； 2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱； 3.不必寫標題。 評分標準 內容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。,參考范文1,【參考范文1】 With the development of technology，robots are ing for our current jobs.When some people show their concern about the issue,77% of Americans consider it normal to have a robot in their homes. Im totally in favor of owning robots in our daily life.First of all，they can finish tasks faster than humans with more accuracy.Whats more，they do not care about the fort and security of their situation，therefore saving workers from boring and even dangerous tasks.Last but not least，they can work at a constant speed with no breaks and perform assignments at a steady high level.,To be honest，what we should really worry about is not the presence of robots themselves but the absence of necessary knowledge about them.Therefore，it is definitely wiser for people to bee more familiar with our future helper rather than consider it a question of robots winning and humans losing.,【參考范文2】 With the development of technology，robots are widely used.While 77% of Americans consider it normal to have a robot in their homes，some people dont think it a wise practice.,Im against robots ing into widespread use in our daily life.First of all，convenient as it may be to employ robots，they may take over the jobs now done by humans，resulting in many people losing their jobs.Whats more，if operating systems in robots got infected with viruses，robots would not perform well as designed，even causing a disaster.Last but not least，I believe humans have better judgement in dealing with some plex matters especially when there is not one clear answer. To be honest，even though employing robots widely may be an irresistible trend，we can not turn a blind eye to its possible threat and its side effects.,