（江蘇專用）2019高考英語(yǔ)二輪增分策略 專題五 書面表達(dá) 第二節(jié) 分類突破 四 讀寫任務(wù)類-記敘文課件.ppt

四、讀寫任務(wù)類記敘文,專題五第二節(jié)分類突破,考題研析,解題必備,內(nèi)容索引,隨堂限時(shí)練,考題研析,典例,滿分作文,閱卷老師點(diǎn)評(píng),典例 請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。 A young man was slapped in the face until he bled because he didnt offer his seat to a woman with a baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou.Later he was proved to be a disabled person. In a series of cases nationwide，we see people being beaten for refusing to give up their seats on public transport，which seems to be a moral problem about correct behavior and self-sacrifice.,People with moral deficiency (who dont give up their seats to deserving people) can be condemned，but they dont deserve to be treated with violence because they offend moral values but not laws.In parison，the attackers behave worse. The attackers regard relying on violence as their only choice if people ignore their appeals to give up their seats.It seems they start a shout or a fight for the sake of justice，but can they still think of their personal intention when they call violence justice？,This “violent justice” can confuse many people and encourage them to do the same，especially when we are overpowered by illogical mood. If cruel and rude acts are rooted in childrens hearts，society will never step into civilization.The practice violates mon values，neither solving problems nor safeguarding civilized society.,寫作內(nèi)容 1.用約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)； 2.用約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)這一事件的看法，內(nèi)容包括： (1)讀完這則新聞，你有什么感受？ (2)假如你是車上的一名乘客，你會(huì)怎樣做？ (3)就如何創(chuàng)建文明、和諧社會(huì)提出你的建議。,寫作要求 1.你可以使用實(shí)例或其他論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句； 2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,滿分作文 The news is about a young disabled man attacked on a bus for not offering his seat to a woman with a baby，which leads a debate about who is right and who is wrong. I am so upset that in our society the woman with a baby should be so impolite.It was wrong of her to get her justice with violence，which will really do great harm to our society.Today in our society，many other people like her would take it for granted that they should be offered a seat on the crowded bus，as the morality requires.However，if I were a passenger on the crowded bus，I would stand out to tell her that the young man is also in need of help because of his disability.,So there is still a long way to go for us to build up a harmonious society.In my opinion，we should fight against the violent justice and try every means to avoid it happening so as to solve such kind of problems and safeguard our civilized and harmonious society.,閱卷老師點(diǎn)評(píng) 1.層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰 本篇習(xí)作按照三段式：概括文章大意談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這則新聞的看法及感受對(duì)于創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)自己的一些建議。按照這一順序展開敘述，不但做到了要點(diǎn)齊全，而且富有層次感。 2.高級(jí)詞匯的使用 習(xí)作中用到了：do great harm to；take.for granted; stand out; in need of; build up; fight against; civilized and harmonious society等，顯示了作者扎實(shí)的綜合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力，讓文章更具有可讀性。,3.多樣化句型的使用 習(xí)作中運(yùn)用了which 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；who 引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句；if虛擬條件句；there be句型等。,解題必備,讀寫任務(wù)型寫作中的記敘文要求考生描述一件與原閱讀材料有關(guān)聯(lián)的事件，并說(shuō)出自己從事件中得到的啟示或?qū)λ枋霈F(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法。 1.寫作步驟 概括原文銜接過(guò)渡描述事件發(fā)表看法 概括原文記敘文常用模版： (1)The passage/story is about a misunderstanding between a student and a teacher. (2)The author tells us a story about. (3)The passage is a story about.,(4)According to the passage，the hero in the story. (5)From the story we know that. 記敘文常用的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)句： (1)This reminds me of the similar experience. (2)This story brings me back to an event many years ago. (3)I had a similar experience.,2.注意事項(xiàng) (1)注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用。記述經(jīng)歷類的記敘文，無(wú)論寫人還是記事，通常以過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主。如果所寫的內(nèi)容不但有過(guò)去的人和事，而且還有現(xiàn)在的人和事，那么對(duì)過(guò)去的人和事應(yīng)采用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，對(duì)現(xiàn)在的人和事應(yīng)采用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 (2)注意人稱的一致性。要根據(jù)題目的要求選用合適的人稱，做到上下文人稱一致。 (3)篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。通常以時(shí)間或事件發(fā)展的順序?yàn)榫€索，有時(shí)也可采用倒敘手法。詳寫主要情節(jié)，略寫次要情節(jié)。,(4)根據(jù)關(guān)鍵詞和主題句進(jìn)行概括。根據(jù)圈定的關(guān)鍵詞和主題句進(jìn)行改寫，用相應(yīng)的同義詞進(jìn)行替換或句型轉(zhuǎn)換，千萬(wàn)不能原封不動(dòng)地抄寫原文。應(yīng)變換表達(dá)原文的句子。,隨堂限時(shí)練,(2018無(wú)錫高三期末) In life，we will succeed and fail often for reasons that are entirely out of our control.For instance，we can be incredibly nice and love someone deeply，and they may not love us back.We can work harder than anyone else at our lessons and still not be as excellent as our peers.We can eat healthy food，exercise and stay away from alcohol and cigarettes，and still get sick.,My first marriage ended in divorce.To me，it felt very unfair.I had worked hard to be a good wife and mother.However，no matter what I did，I could not make the relationship work. I could have been shut down by that experience.I could have decided that if one person didnt appreciate me as a wife，then no one would.I could have given up.But I knew that I wanted to be married.I knew that I wanted to experience traditional family life.So I didnt let one seemingly unfair experience stop me from believing that I could one day be happily married.And then one day，I met this kind，thoughtful，,generous man with whom I now have a wonderful friendship and marriage.But that wouldnt have happened if I had decided to give up after one failed marriage. What Ive learned over the years is that we can do all the things that deserve a good oute，but get bad things in return instead. The bottom line is that life is not fair.That is a tough pill to swallow for many of us.As a result，some people shut down after being hit by even one unfair blow from life.They cant handle the fact that our efforts dont always get the results that we expect.But if we let lifes unfairness defeat us，we will never receive the beautiful blessings that life has in store for us.,寫作內(nèi)容 1.用約30個(gè)詞概括短文內(nèi)容； 2.用約120個(gè)詞就“生活中處處存在看似不公平的事”這一主題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)： (1)你對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的看法(至少兩點(diǎn))； (2)假如你遇到這一現(xiàn)象，你會(huì)如何處理。,寫作要求 1.可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,參考范文,【參考范文】 Life is full of varieties of seemingly unfair experiences，which may defeat those who have lost courage and even confidence，but bless those who remain true to their original aspiration. For many reasons，we often have to encounter unfairness in the plex society.No one can avoid or escape unexpected changes in our daily lives；however，unfairness，if it sets us reflecting upon our mistakes and failure，may be a route toward success.,When were faced with lifes seeming unfairness，our faith needs to jump in.When life doesnt go according to plan，we have to let go of the oute that we are looking forward to and keep trying，working hard and doing the right thing.Please dont be discouraged.Accept that life is neither fair nor straightforward.And by knowing that if we remain confident，we can drive our unfair experiences away and use them for our benefit.,