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.（一）Dear Elli,Im a senior student. I like make friends with people but I do my best to get on well everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she disliked me and that he didnt want to be my friend any more. Now she has started to make fun of me because of Im fat. Im kind to her, but why cant she be friend of mine? Other problem is about my weight. Should I do less exercise or use pills? And do you knowany other way? Please give me some advices. Yours, Mary（二）Dear Sir,I am now a college student at Peking University. Im quite interested in the position offering by your website for part-time English reporters. I think Im fit the job. As a student, Ive read a lot and have many knowledge in different field. Im fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, Im easily to get along with and I enjoy working together with another.Above all, I once work as a reporter for my college broadcast station. So Im sure I can do the job well if I will get the chance work for a website. Im looking forward to your reply.（三）Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no play make Jack a dull boy? What this means is that if youstudy all the times you will become a boring person. You must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do not have to compete your classmates. No one can be happier in studying seven day and seven nights a week.（四）Dear Tracy，Although Im 1 6 years old，but my father still treats me as a careless children. He doesnt value my opinions. He is very strict with me and often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house while he did this all time. I think he fails to set an example me to follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.”Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests，making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I cant bear what he does. I have been tried many times to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me.（五）Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted to see the report about an important football match the night before. The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless he saw the sea. He got on at the next station, and had to wait a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”, he shouted.（六）When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift for me in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers are getting more and more usefully now. Much information can be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened in the world on the internet. In past, people had to do lots of work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do it instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises on my computer. Then it will correct it and tell me the right answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare the exam than before. The computer has become my real friend. （七）In 10th April this year, as Li Ming was leaving his home in the morning, he got into the lift together a woman. When the lift got to the four floor, it stopped and a middle-aged man enter. Once the man got in, he snatched the womanshandbag. He pulled both Li Ming and the woman out of the lift. Li Ming ran downstairs. When he reached for the ground floor, he saw the man walked out. He told the caretaker at once and they both followed thief to a restaurant nearby which they met two policemen. Li Ming told them all about the case and the thief has finally caught. （八）One day last week I went a walk in the country. In the morning the weather was well and the sun was shining; the sky was blue and there were no could. Soon a cool wind started blown and black clouds were covered the sun and then it started to rain. There were no houses in sight, but I got very wet.After a hour or so, I managed to catch a bus which took me home. But when I arrived I has shiveringand I knew I had caught a bad cold. I must have taken my coat. I had nothing to do but to stay at home and wait for a doctor.（九）I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city in last week. I was surprised to see that great changes had been taken place in the countryside. Take my aunts family for example. We supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and have over ten workers working for themselves. Their familys income reached as much 100,000 yuan last year. Nor only did they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford a trip abroad every year. When asking what else they needed most, they said that they wanted to learn a few English so that they could do business with foreigners directly. To their delighted, my cousin can use that he has learned from university to help them with overseas trade.（十）Thank you for your e-mail ! You asked me about my friends and how we like to do . Well , I guess I do what most people to do . I like reading books, watching films and listen to music . My favourite sport is volley-ball. Most of my friend play volleyball together with me . My best friend is two years elder than me .She goes to a different school , but we always get together after school to talk and have funs . We sometimes do homework together .What about yourself ? Tell me something about yourself , your friends and what you like to do . I had also like to know something about China . We have read China in school and I am very interesting in learning more about it . Please e-mail me soon ! Lisa （十一）Here is a photo which Ive kept for many years. Look, the child in it is me . Do you think it that I was very lovely? Yes .You see , I was making face . There was a hat on my head while there were no shoes on my foot . I asked my mother how old I was them . Mother said that I was three years old in that time . Can you see the house all making of wood ? The house which was new then , but it is very old now . I was born in this old house and lived here for eighteen years . I like living here , because there were many friendly neighbours we get along very good with each other , but its a great pity that We will move away soon . To tell a truth , I really cant bear to part from them . （十二）Good morning, everyone. Yesterday I received a letter from a elderly gentleman. He told me the other day he saw that some student in our school uniform crowded onto a bus without waiting their turns. On the bus they refuse to offer their seats for old people. What was worse, they even said dirty words to each other. I am very much sorry for this. Todays youth are tomorrows old people. Respect the old and caring for the young is a fine tradition of our Chinese. Every one of us have the responsibility to keep it up. I hope that you can learn something this incident and you will have good manners whether you are inside or outside the school. Thank you.（十三）Hello!Im Hannah, is former Editor of Kiwiboxs Life & People section.Ive now moved and became the Senior Editor of Books & School. A little about me you may not know: I am 17- year old high school junior from Arizona. Ive been on Kiwibox for January of 2004,which I became a reporter. Outside of Kiwibox, my hobbies include music, writing and just hanging out and try to get through high school. Im really happily to be a part of the Books & School section. I love read and write, so book reviews are always a lot of funs. If you have any questions or comments about this section, Id love to answer it. You can reach me at gingermulatta.（十四）Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke up. So he decided to make better car himself, but in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls, a car maker, was very interesting in Royces car, and soon Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the worlds record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down once. After the drive, it was cost just over 2 to put the car back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. （十五）How much times do you spend with your parents? When did you last tell them what is on your mind? You parents are your dearest people in the world when you are young. And they always care of you deep. But even though many children still love their mum and dad, families may become more close as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families to get together. Have you ever thought what you can show your parents that you love them? Find chance and do something for them or to have a sincere talk withthem. If you can do this, your parents will be very happy.（十六）“Practice makes perfect” was an old saying . It tells us that it does not any matter if we are slow at doing something . As long as we keep on trying and practice , well do a good job in the end . The saying is especial useful in English study .Since a student is poor at speaking, he should grasp every chance to open mouth and speak English . His oral English may be excellent one day due to his hard works . Not only is the saying useful in English study , it is also helpful in our day life . To an extent , it is no short cut in doing everything since key to success lies in“Practice makes perfect”. (十七)At a Friday night, a poor young artist stood at the gate of the subway station and played his violin with large piece of paper on the groundBefore long , he was surrounding with people, who were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said,“ last night, a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please come to claim it soon.” Seeing this, people wondered why it could be. After about half an hour, a man came and brought back his lottery which won a prize of 500,000. Late someone asked the violinist: “ Why dont you take the lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said,“While I dont have much money, I live happily. However , I lose honesty, I wont be happy forever.” (十八)A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language. At the first class, the teacher asked us do a pronunciation exercise, in which he would say one word or two in French, and each student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him why. "I find it great funs. Its the first time Ive heard an American speak French with a German accent." he explained it. （十九）One day I happen to find a chatting room on my QQ, there people were chatting in English . I tried to chat with some of them . To my surprised . I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me . I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions . With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely .（二十）While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. A well-dressing man on the bus helped me great. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctors office. and took me to there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. I didnt speak French well, so I cant talk with him very much. However, even if we couldnt talk, but we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned that communication can take place without much actual language at all. （二十一）The Internet is playing a important part in our daily life. On the net, we can learn about news both home and abroad and some other informations as wellWe can also make phone calls, send messages by e-mail，go to net schools，learn foreign languages by ourselvesBeside，we can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the chess or cardsThe net even help us do shopping，make a chat with others and make friends with them. In word，the Internet has made our life more easier （二十二）During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortable journey very much. This experience have shown that traveling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys. (二十三)I went to see the film after supper. On my way to the cinema. I met an English woman, whom had lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place here in the past few years and she had told me something about her country. Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practiced my speaking English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would not have been able to help him. (二十四)One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I am rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.(二十五)I received your letter was dated April l6 the day before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted to learn how you are getting along very well with your lessons. Time passes quickly. After dozens of days, youll finish the middle school. What pleases us most is that you do very good to make up your mind to enter for the college entrance examination this summer. What wonderful it is ! Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you. We wished you to make better use of your time. The full preparations you make, the surer of success youll certain be.(二十六)Dear Jim,Id like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.6, which was a fine day. There was over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 secondsand broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours,Li Ping(二十七)A group of scientists were planning to go to countryside to do a scientific research in order to find out that whether the environment of the country had pollutedOn arrival，they started to check the air and waterTo our surprise，they found how terribly the situation wasThey could see the serious pollutionLook into the cause，they persuade the government to pass the law to protect environment and kept the balance of natureNow everything has changedBirds are singing while tree and grass waving 改錯答案（一）第一行make making, but and， well后加 with 第二行in去掉第三行he she 第四行of去掉 friend前加 a , other another第五行l(wèi)ess more 第六行advicesadvice（二） 第一行atin第二行offeringoffered; fit后加for第三行manymuch; fieldfields第四行easilyeasy第五行anotherothers; workworked第六行will去掉 第七行 work 前加to（三）第一行from of/about ；makemakes 第二行timestime 第三行havinghave ；himthem 第四行that去掉 第五行try后加to 83正確 第六行compete后加against/with第七行happierhappy；day-days（四）第一行 去掉but；childrenchild第二行aboutfor 第三行diddoes；在all后加the第四行me 前to ；DoingDo 第五行hurtinghurt第六行去掉been ；hehim（五）第一行went goes 第二行 newspaper前面加 a ；passing pass 第三行 over to；see read 第五行 unless until； on off 第六行 It 改為There 第七行去掉to ； very more （六）第一行 去掉第一個me ；去掉in 第二行 usefully useful 第三行 that what 第四行past前加the 第五行buthowever 第六行diddo ；第二個itthem 第七行verymore；prepare后加for（七）第一行InOn 第二行 together后加with；fourfourth 第三行enter entered 第四行pulledpushed 第五行for去掉； walked 改為walking 第六行thief前加the；which改為where 第七行has改為was（八）第一行 went/for； wellfine/nice 第二行couldclouds 第三行blownblowing ；去掉were；第四行butso；第一個aan 第五行haswas第六行mustshould；去掉第二個to （九）第一行去掉in 第二行 been去掉 第三行We改為They 第四行 themselves改為them .第五行l(wèi)ast前加as ；did改為do 第六行 asking改為 asked 第七行 few改為 little 第八行 delighted改為delight ；that改為what .（十）第一行how改為what 第二行刪去people后面的to 第三行l(wèi)isten改為listening ；friend改為friends 第四行elder改為older 第五行funs改為fun 第六行 第一個yourself改為you 第七行had改為would 第八行read后加上about；interesting改為interested（十一）第二行 去掉it ；face 前加 a 第三行 footfeet 第四行in at 第五行 making made；去掉which 第六行 and 后加have 第七行 wereare； goodwell 第八行 a the （十二）第一行aan 第二行studentstudents 第三行 refuse refused ； for to 第四行 much 去掉 第五行 Respect Respecting 第六行 our us ；have has 第七行 this前加from；and 后加 that （十三）第一行is 后加the 第二行becamebecome第三行17yearolda 17yearold；forsince 第四行whichwhen 第五行trytrying 第六行happilyhappy ； love后加 to第七行funsfun 第八行 85itthem（十四）第一行thatwhich 第二行a better ；but and 第三行interestinginterested；gowent 第四行modelmodels第五行drivedriving 第六行 去掉was 第七行ThisIt；regarded as (considered)（十五）第一行time-times ；is-was 第二行YouYour 第三行of-for； deep-deeply 第四行more-less ；you-they 第五行what-how 第六行achance ；去掉to（十六）第一行 was- is ; 去掉any 第二行practice- practicing 第三行especial-especially ；Since- If 第四行open后加 his 第五行works- work 第六行 day-daily ;第二個it- there 第七行 key前加the （十七）第一行 第一個at改為on 第二行with后加a 第三行surrounding改為surrounded ; word改為words 第四行mistaken改為mistake 第五行why改為what 第六行brought改為took 第八行Late改為Later ；dont改為didnt ; I lose前加If（十八）第一行 returning to 第二行 have-had ；good-well 第三行interested-interesting第四行us后加to； one-a 第五行their-his ；去掉第二個to 第六行 funs-fun 第七行去掉it （十九）第一行happen happened ；therewhere 第二行 surprisedsurprise 第三行 werewas；memine第四行 But So ； practisepractising 第五行 去掉from第六行 AsWith or went-going ； communicatewith（二十）第一行 traveled-traveling ； well-dressing-well-dressed 第二行 greatgreatly ; office 后加was 第三行 去掉to 第四行cant- couldnt ；去掉but 第五行 myself- my ； tofor 第六行 healthy- health(二十一) 第一行aan; 第二行athome; informations-information第四行andlearn; Beside-Besides第五行chess前的the去掉; help-helps第六行 makehave; Ina第七行 moremuch 或去掉more(二十二) 第一行airfor第二行andor; safe-safer第三行happilyhappy; longer-long第四行cloud-clouds第五行interested-interesting第六行havehas;in-by第七行ofto 或make-making(二十三) 第一行 第一個the去掉 第二行whomwho;chanceto第三行g(shù)o-going第四行been去掉 ；第二個 had去掉 第五行but去掉第七行 speakingspoken; on-at 第八行 him-her(二十四) 第一行aswhen; rings-rang第二行She-It第三行a-the第四行wasfull第五行openingopened;In-To第六行am-was第七行 about去掉；whichthat(二十五) 第一行 was前加that或去掉was 第二行 greatly前加are ； 去掉how 第三行 AfterIn ； 去掉the 第四行g(shù)ood well第五行 whathow 第六行 wishedwish； fullfuller 第七行certaincertainly(二十六) 第一行去掉more ；holding改held 第二行was 改為were ；attend改attending 第三行fi