2017年高考英語 考前復習大串講 專題3.5 書面表達感悟高考

書面表達感悟高考Passage1 （2016年新課標1卷）假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Ms Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，已使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I dont even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【亮點】 本文是一篇較為優(yōu)秀的范文。格式正確，要點全面，語言通順流暢，很好地完成了寫作任務。在本文中開頭提出寫信的目的，然后具體講述自己的困難，再提出請求，最后表達自己的感激之情。所以在內(nèi)容上邏輯性較強。此外，作者還使用了不定式短語In order to get some practical experience, 現(xiàn)在分詞短語hoping you can give me some help, 賓語從句if there are something to pay attention to等。經(jīng)典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的亮點所在。Passage2（2016年浙江卷）“Planning is good , but doing is better”是一句英國名言。請以此為題用英語寫一篇100120詞的短文。要求如下： 1. 簡述你對這句名言的理解； 2. 用一個具體事例加以說明； 3. 給出恰當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意：1. 文章的標題已給出（不計詞數(shù)）： 2. 文中不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學校、老師或同學姓名等真實信息，否則按作弊行為認定。Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better_【答案】Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.【解析】試題分析：本文為一篇開放式作文。題目給出標題和提綱。結(jié)合題目可判斷出主要是介紹將計劃付諸實施的重要性。圍繞這個主旨去寫，不能跑題。提綱部分還要求三個方面：1.簡述你對這句名言的理解；2.用一個具體事例加以說明；3.給出恰當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。這就確定了作文的結(jié)構(gòu)框架。在主旨和結(jié)構(gòu)確定下來后，還要注意文章應用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。寫作時發(fā)揮自己的想象，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將文章完整地表述出來。注意要主次分明、詳略得當，語言力求準確、簡潔，同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章自然連貫。最后要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等?！久麕燑c睛】本篇范文短小精悍，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語言簡潔，時態(tài)、人稱準確，很好地完成了寫作任務。在文章開頭，作者緊扣題目，提出自己對plan的理解，同時引出下文，然后用自己的親身經(jīng)歷表明要將計劃付諸實施非常重要。在文中，作者用到了短語in detail, bear no fruit, carry out, set out to等短語，避免了文章表達的單一。此外，還用到了賓語從句how we do和how I achieved my success, 以及句型It came from good planning and better doing combined等，這些都給文章增加了亮點。Passage3 （2016年北京卷）假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國朋友Jim 在給你的郵件中提到他對中國歷史很感興趣，并請你介紹一位你喜歡的中國歷史人物。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 該人物是誰； 2. 該人物的主要貢獻； 3. 該人物對你的影響。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Jim, _Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Its great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!Yours,Li Hua亮點說明：范文使用了詞組hear from, As for, In fact和搭配inspire sb to do sth等，豐富了作文內(nèi)容；范文注意上下文的語意連貫。 【名師點睛】本題偏向于信息介紹類的開放式寫作，對于應用文格式的要求并不高，但對于語言組織和詞匯積累的要求極高。本次應用文并沒有限定考生必須寫某一位歷史人物，但是談及人物的貢獻和對自己的影響時，考生有可能會遇到大量的詞匯障礙，故難度較去年明顯提升。Passage4 （2015年新課標1卷）假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風俗和中學生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：1. 欄目介紹；2. 稿件內(nèi)容；3. 稿件長度：約400詞；4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；3. 開頭語已為你寫好?！敬鸢浮緿ear Peter,I'd like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.運用了過去分詞作后置定語， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.運用了賓語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量習語和短語，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。Passage5 （2014年新課標2卷）一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是“十年后的我”，請根據(jù)下列要點和你的暢想完成短文。1. 家庭：2. 工作：3. 業(yè)余生活。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右：2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫：3.開頭語已為你寫好。【答案】I often imagine what my life would be like in the future . I think my life will be very different in ten years .i will be twenty eight years old by then . I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child . I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer . I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues . Iwill do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming , running and various ball games . On my holidays , I will travel around the world .In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful .【亮點說明】本篇范文短小精悍，要點全面，語言簡練，時態(tài)人稱準確，很好的完成了寫作任務。在文章開頭作者緊扣題目，提出自己對未來的暢想，然后從生活，工作，家庭三個方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短語In my free time , In a word , such as等介詞短語，避免了文章句式的單一。此外，還用到了賓語從句in whatever I do、I will work in a computer company as a program designer等，這些都給樸素的語言帶來了亮點。7