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1、I am a English teacher.,I am come from Neijiang.,I glad to meet you.,,am,__,an,去掉am或come,,錯誤設(shè)置及考點(diǎn)分布,兩大類型:,II.邏輯錯誤Logic error,I.語法錯誤 Grammatical error,,I.1.詞法錯誤,I.2.句法錯誤,I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but,an,,,1.1 冠詞常見錯誤:,1) 不定冠詞a和an互改 2)
2、不定冠詞 a或an和定冠詞the互改 3)根據(jù)需要增刪冠詞(注意慣用法),the,I want to take some picture of rare animals. Pat refused to give her any informations about Sarah.,1.2 名詞常見錯誤:,pictures,information,,,名詞單復(fù)數(shù),性,格。,1.3 介詞常見錯誤:,Please send the application form . They are planning to visit China in next year.,,to,介詞的錯用、多余或缺失,It
3、 is dishonest and foolishly to help or to ask help from others.,1.4 形容詞和副詞常見錯誤:,1)兩者錯用 2)形容詞、副詞的比較級或最高級,,foolish,surprising,,Its surprised how fast you are used to it.,He bought some chocolate cakes, and put it in a secret place. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy them .,,1
4、.5 代詞常見錯誤:,,themselves,主要是代詞的格與數(shù)的錯用和一致性,them,,The club are made of 45 students. All of people objected to vote for him.,,,1.6 動詞常見錯誤:,以下短語to是介詞,后接ndoing: look forward to ...希望 object to ...反對 get down to 著手做... lead to ....通向,導(dǎo)致 be used to 習(xí)慣于 stick to 堅持 pay attention to 注意 devote...to
5、把...奉獻(xiàn)給...,1)時態(tài)錯誤 Tense 2)主謂不一致 Subject-Verb Concord 3)主動語態(tài)與被動語態(tài)錯用 4)非謂語動詞的錯用 Non-predict verb,family,club,class等集合名詞視為整體時表單數(shù)。,is,voting,,,1.7 連詞常見錯誤:,連詞主要考查上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,包括并列連詞、從屬連詞、連接代詞、連接副詞、關(guān)系代詞、關(guān)系副詞。,I liked the oil painting very much the last time when I saw it.,,,the moment ,the minute,each time,
6、 the firstlast time , every time 等作連詞,引導(dǎo)狀語從句,其后不再用時間連詞when。,2.1 定語從句 Attributive clause 2.2 名詞性從句 None clause 2.3 狀語從句 Adverbial clause 2.4 句式結(jié)構(gòu) Sentence structure,I.2.句法錯誤Syntax error,We will hold a debate ,which topic is about air pollution.,whose,,The news what he was injured is not true. He got
7、up early in order to he could catch the first bus. They fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.,,,,visited,that,that,When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mo
8、untains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We mu
9、st found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.,____,thought,,the,____,____,____,____,____,__,__,and,with,,serious,Many,air,find,ourthe,Missing word少詞,Unnecessary word多詞,Wrong word錯詞,Passage 1,The Steps of Correcting:,Step1:Skimming (通讀全文,掌握大意,確定時態(tài)改明顯錯),Step2:
10、Scanning (逐句研讀參照考點(diǎn)),Step3 :Checking (復(fù)核檢查,注意大小寫三大考察點(diǎn):8+2),Writing,,我校攝影俱樂部(photography club)將舉辦國際中學(xué)生攝影展, 主題是環(huán)保。展覽時間從六月十五起,持續(xù)三周;凡感興趣的學(xué)生 均可參加。 我知道你拍了些不錯的照片且想為環(huán)保做貢獻(xiàn)。記得上次你參觀我校 時曾展示了有關(guān)環(huán)保的照片。這次攝影展是讓更多人目睹那些照片的好機(jī) 會。請將照片發(fā)到郵箱I.期待你的回信。,Our school photography club are going to hold a International High School
11、Student Photography Show,which theme is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interesting is welcome to participate. I know you take good picture and want to do something for environmental protection. I remember you show me some photos o
12、n that theme the last time when you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see it . If you want to join, you can send your photos . Looking forward to hear from you soon.,Our school photography club are going to hold a International High School Student Photography Show,
13、which theme is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interesting is welcome to participate.,is,,,,an,whose,interested,,I know you take good picture and want to do something for environmental protection. I remember you show me some photos
14、on that theme the last time when you visited our school.This is surely a good chance for more people to see it.If you want to join, you can send your photos . Looking forward to hear from you soon.,,,to,pictures,,,showed,hearing,them,,,2016年全國高考英語全國卷II 假定你是李華,你校攝影俱樂部(photographyclub)將舉辦國際 中學(xué)攝影展。
15、請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信。請他提供作品。 信的內(nèi)容包括: 1主題:環(huán)境保護(hù); 2展覽時間; 3投稿郵箱:. 注意: 1詞數(shù)100左右; 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。,Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for thr
16、ee weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.,I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to . Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, LiHua,Homework,Book VI P8 Reading & Writing Write a passage and exchange it with your neighbor to correct .,Thank you!,