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1、Legendofbutterflylovers 梁祝 1 高考新題型讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練1 2 Myfatherisaliartome 3 Sometimesloveishiddenbehindactions whichmaybeunseentooureyeswithoutspecialattention Whathaveyoulearnedfromthevideo Selflesslove 4 5 6 7 8 第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫 滿分25分 閱讀下面350字短文 根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫 使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事 注意 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為180左右 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ) 續(xù)寫完成后 請(qǐng)
2、用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ) 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段 每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好 若詞數(shù)少于130 從總分中扣去2分 9 Briefinformation acoupleoflovers God thewomandoctor coupleofloversledan envy lifeinatown fortunate themanhadanaccidentandwasseverely injure Thewoman attend himdayandnight herloverwasstillsleeping hope shemadeadeal God tobeabutterflyforthreeyea
3、rsinexchangefortheman s recover wasahardchoicebuteasytomaketoawillingheart A enviable Unfortunately injured attendedto But hopelessly with recovery which 10 Summary Theplot 情節(jié) ofthestory Development Ending Beginning Climax 高潮 A Themanwasbadlyinjuredandshowednosignsofrecovery B ThewomandealtwithGodto
4、saveherloverbutanothergirlappearedbetweenthem C Themanandthewomanhadanenviablelove A C B 11 Endingsofourstudents 12 Endingsofourstudents 13 Endingsofourstudents 14 logic 邏輯 15 白貓掉到河里 黑貓奮盡全力救它上岸 上岸后 白貓對(duì)黑貓說(shuō)了什么 Continuethestory Youshouldfindthecluesinthestory 16 logic thetitle thegivenstory theunderlin
5、edwords thetwogivensentences Theyarethecluestohelpyoucreateyourwritinglogically 17 underlinedwordsenjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnessthechurchGodtearsloveregretbecamethebutterflyflysweetheart stricken underlinedwords 選5個(gè)以上 who 人物 Godthebutterflywhere 地點(diǎn) thechurchwhat 事件 enjoyingthesunrisethesun
6、setconsciousnesstearslovebutterflysweetheart stricken clues 線索 Icanhelpyou forthreeyears Yes Ido iwon tregretdoingthat Godalsofeltsad Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone 18 logic thetitle thegivenstory theunderlinedwords thetwogivensentences 19 Paragraph1 Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtohe
7、r butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman sshoulderoffandon Singleissimple doubleistrouble triangleisterrible 利用已給信息將情節(jié)推向高潮 Howtodealwiththewomandoctor Whentogetmarried 20 Paragraph2 Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone 利用已給信息得出一個(gè)完美結(jié)局 21 Creat
8、ion Thepossibleversionsoftheending e b Themanandthedoctormarried andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly Themanandthedoctormarried andthewomanleft c Themanproposedtothedoctor butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion d Themanproposedtothedoctor butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwh
9、ichinvolvedhiminadilemma Finally themanleft negative negative positive negative 22 2020 1 9 23 thetwogivensentences theunderlinedwords Thetwoleadyou helpyou andcontrolyoutogointherightdirection 24 Readingforbriefinformation Readingforsummary Readingforcreation Readingforwriting 25 Therewasonceaplaci
10、d平靜的 溫和的 沉著的andbeautifultowninwhichtherewereacoupleofloverswhowouldoftenstaytogetheronthetopofthemountainenjoyingthesunriseandbytheseaappreciatingthesunset Everyonewhoknewthemcouldnothelpenvyingthemandprayingfortheirhappylove 26 Competition 27 GroupA paragraph1 1 目睹 見證 vt 2 他說(shuō)過的最甜蜜的話 提示詞sweet 3 蝴蝶難過
11、得情不自禁地哭了 tears 4 變深 使加深 v 5 第三年的最后一天6 他們的愛已成為回憶 GroupB paragraph2 被打動(dòng)的 受感動(dòng)的 adj 揭露真相3 對(duì)于我為他所做的事我從來(lái)沒有后悔過 提示詞regret 用倒裝句式 4 喚醒 vt 5 遭受許多挫折6 男人震驚了 越發(fā)覺得后悔和內(nèi)疚 提示詞thefeelingofregrets guilt 28 1 目睹 見證vt 2 他說(shuō)過的最甜蜜的話 提示詞sweet 3 蝴蝶難過得情不自禁地哭了 提示詞tears see witness Thesweetestwordshehaseversaid Thebutterflycould
12、n thelpburstingintotearssadly Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears 29 5 在第三年的最后一天 Onthelastdayofthethirdyear 4 變深 使加深vt vi deepen 6 他們的愛已成為回憶 Theirlovehasbecomememories Theirlovehasbecomeapast 30 Paragraphy1 Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman Sh
13、ecoulddonothingbutrestontheman sshoulderoffandon draft Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday Timewentbyquickly OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover themanproposedtohisgirlfriend Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid Hearingthis the
14、butterflycouldn tbreathe Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears sheflewawaysilently Atthatmoment sherealizedthathewouldn tknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast 31 2 揭露真相 1 被打動(dòng)的 受感動(dòng)的adj be by touched uncoverthetruth expose reveal moved impressed 3 對(duì)于我為他所做的事我從來(lái)沒有后悔過 提示詞regret 用倒裝句式 NeverhaveIregrettedforw
15、hatIhavedoneforhim 32 4 喚醒vt awaken arouse 5 遭受許多挫折 gothroughmanyobstacles suffermanystruggles 6 男人震驚了 越發(fā)覺得后悔和內(nèi)疚 提示詞thefeelingofregrets guilt Themangotshocked andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger setbacksfrustrations 33 Paragraphy2 Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly Doyouregretforwhatyouhav
16、edone draft Thebutterflysaid No NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim movedbyherwords Godwaslostinthought shehadgonethroughsomanystrugglesandsheshouldn tdeservethat So thedaybeforethemanandthedoctor swedding Goduncoveredthewholetruthtohim Obviously themanwasshockedandthefeelingofregretsandguiltg
17、rewstronger Thelovedeepinsidewasawakened Herushedtothechurchtobegforthewoman sforgiveness Andhedeterminedthatthistimehewon tlethergo Hewilltakehertoenjoythesunriseandthesunsetforalifetime 34 Step3polish 潤(rùn)色 Step2draft 擬稿 Step1compose 構(gòu)思 Readingforwriting 35 Paragraphy1 Thebutterflyknewthatallthesesho
18、uldhavebelongedtoher butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman sshoulderoffandon draft Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday Timewentbyquickly OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover themanproposedtohisgirlfriend Hetookoutabeautifulr
19、ingandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid Hearingthis thebutterflycouldn tbreathe Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears sheflewawaysilentlyingreatgriefanddespair Atthatmoment sherealizedthathewouldn tknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast 36 Howtopolishyourwords 小 心思 豐滿人物內(nèi)心Innerthoughtstoportraythefigure
20、s 37 Tip1 小 心思 豐滿人物內(nèi)心 悲傷 快樂 2016年10月高考作文23分 38 Tip1 小 心思 豐滿人物內(nèi)心 震驚 2017年6月高考作文23分 39 Howtodescribeyourinnerthoughts 1 Feelinghappy sad angry guilty depressed 2 Drivenbycuriosity asenseofsympathy 同情 或者是Deeplytouched movedby 3 fullofregret anger fear gratitude 感激 4 具體的動(dòng)作描寫standfrozen jumpwithjoy tremb
21、lewithanger withtearsfillingone seyes withone seyeswideopen等等 40 Let shaveatry 1 Godsaidtothewoman Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone Drivenbyasenseofsympathy 同情 Godsaidtothewoman Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone 2 ShesaidtoGod Thankyou God Withtearsfillinghereyes ShesaidtoGodcheerfully Thankyou God 41 inne
22、rthoughts 1 theme negative positive interpretation 解意 keywords 關(guān)鍵詞 twogivensentences clues 線索 Step3polish 潤(rùn)色 Step2draft 擬稿 Step1compose 構(gòu)思 Readingforwriting 42 Homework Chooseoneofthefollowingthemetowritetwoparagraphsforthestorybasedonthegivenunderlinedwords a Themanandthedoctormarried andthewomanleft b Themanandthedoctormarried andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly Themanproposedtothedoctor butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma Finally themanleft 43 SeeYou 44 2020 1 9 45
讀后續(xù)寫PPT課件.ppt
